for Melancholic6/1/2011 c3 
1salimaran08
I THINK IT'S TO SHORT to stick with the plot;but anyway it's sweet,try longer chapter next time,keep it up ;)
1salimaran08I THINK IT'S TO SHORT to stick with the plot;but anyway it's sweet,try longer chapter next time,keep it up ;)
5/31/2011 c3 1Lil' EyeCandy
It's fine if you want to keep it short and simple but please do change the words/letters(what do you name it?) back to normal, not the big bold black ones you're typing into. It's quite a headache to read through your stories with it.
One more thing, Heiji's dad is named Heizo by the way.(^^)
Other than that, gud job!
1Lil' EyeCandyIt's fine if you want to keep it short and simple but please do change the words/letters(what do you name it?) back to normal, not the big bold black ones you're typing into. It's quite a headache to read through your stories with it.
One more thing, Heiji's dad is named Heizo by the way.(^^)
Other than that, gud job!
5/21/2011 c2 Lil' EyeCandy
Not bad at all, a very lightheartening read actually. But it would be much better if you could make it a little bit longer (more into the chapter theme) so that readers would have lots to ponder upon. :)
Not bad at all, a very lightheartening read actually. But it would be much better if you could make it a little bit longer (more into the chapter theme) so that readers would have lots to ponder upon. :)