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7/9/2011 c15 3K-Essence
Another good chapter. We all know part of the ending and I still find myself in anticipation for what is coming next and how everything works out afterwards. Please write longer chapters again, it can be such a tease...lol. Really good!
7/9/2011 c15 56Leigh59
Spencer is great the way he is with JJ trying his best to comfort her. So they know now who the unsub is so close to home, but it had to be. Love the emotion and the fear that is coming form both Derek and Penelope.
7/9/2011 c15 72PinkAngel17
Oh no, he knows where she is! Great chapter! Especially the sweet little scene with Penelope and Morgan.
7/9/2011 c15 66LoveforPenandDerek
wow the end of the chapter was really good. The tender moment between them and then the scary moment with the scary combined to stir up two different moods.
7/9/2011 c15 5dellaslovinlife
Hooray for update! I can't wait to see how this all turns out. I check my email daily hoping for updates from this story and BAM! There was one this morning and I was like YEEEEESS! Lol. Can't wait for more :)
7/9/2011 c15 krisphoenix
Waves fist at Damon...

Loving this story, please continue and update soon. It is too good to wait
7/9/2011 c15 215klcm
Okay wow! Loved the cliffhanger there Rach! It was all getting good too! They had a plan and then BAM he was watching! Bring on more love, this was worth the wait
7/9/2011 c15 Kimd33
I knew he was still watching.
7/5/2011 c14 10X-MJ-X
How could I have missed this, Rach my darling please forgive this silly English girl I have no excuse and I will continue to apologise for all eternity if that's what it takes...

I'm here now and I have to say one thing...

I'M ALIVE!

I'M ALIVE!

I'M ALIVE!

Ok, so that was three things but you do not know how relieved I am that I survived... I was so worried after the last chapter, which of course you knew and despite the fact that you told me I'd be Ok I never can tell with you...

I loved Hotch's reaction when he found me, at first he was all business - where's the UNSUB but then as if by magic he became human and he was full of concern... holding my hand and being nice... until of course I mentioned that I knew who the UNSUB was and then he was like Ok so tell me now! Hmm it was nice whilst it lasted and I would like to state for the record, since I am the namesake of the technician who has just been brutalised - I STILL DO NOT KNOW WHO IT IS because Rach won't tell me!

When Michelle was just about to say who it was I knew you were going to do something to stop her and you know what on that count I was not disappointed because the EMTs rushed in and stopped her from giving us all that vital piece of information...

and then...

We're sudden;y back to Derek and Penelope and honey it was perfect, I could really tell that it was fuelled by desperation and passion and most importantly love and I adore you for treating us to a love scene so tender and yet so sexy and steamy - thank you!

This chapter was just perfect because it feels like everything is starting to be drawn together and I feel like we're finally going to find out who this guy is and why he's doing this to our girl... that's also quite sad though because you know I love this and I don't want it to end...

Oh and that final line... I CANNOT wait for the next chapter...

"Morgan we've IDed him"

I am literally jumping up and down with excitement so hurry up and write it woman...

I promise I'll be here as soon as the next chapter comes in, again I can only apologise for being so late, you know I would never do it deliberately or without good reason...

I loved loved loved it as always my dear.

Love from your super fan...

Michelle (the real one!)

xxx
7/1/2011 c14 28sangreal7
Oh man! What a cliffhanger! I really thought we were going to find out who it was ... but okay, I can wait :)

Beautiful scene between Derek and Penelope there ... very impassioned and loving at the same time. Love that they managed to have that moment in the midst of everything going on.
6/30/2011 c14 3K-Essence
Wonderful chapter. I can not wait to find out who the unsub is. You have a fabulously delicious way of drawing things out. Loved the reunion. Glad you didn't kill off Michelle.
6/30/2011 c14 56Leigh59
I'm so glad that Hotch found Michelle in time, and that she was able to give him the information before she was spirited away but the medical crew. The rejoining of Morgan with his Penelope was beautiful and very sensual. She loves him ans wants to show him just how much and he trusts her enough to let her show him.
6/30/2011 c14 215klcm
Oh love! Your update was brilliant! Actually so glad you didn't kill Michelle off! Lol nice bit of smut and now there's an ID... Looking forward to more as ever.
6/30/2011 c14 jovianfrog
Oh, why are you so cruel? So glad Michelle hadn't died or anything so she was able to tell Hotch.

What a great reunion too! Very beautiful and hot, of course :) Sad they were interrupted, but with good news. Can't wait to find out who this SOB is!
6/30/2011 c14 66LoveforPenandDerek
that was a beautiful love scene
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