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9/7/2020 c2 Angel
What happens to Yuki is he ok and when they find out shuichi really a girl please update
9/1/2017 c2 Sabrina linzy
Can you please write some more on this story i like to read something different then shuichi a boy i want to read about shuichi being a girl.
8/21/2017 c1 Sabrina linzy
Can you finish writing a story like this Shuichi secret write like 30 chapters or 20 please
7/31/2014 c2 Deb41
Please continue!
11/18/2013 c3 YaoiHimeSama
Please update . Hope you find insperation for your next chapter :).
6/21/2013 c3 Hopelle
please hurry and make more chapters it sounds interesting
1/26/2012 c2 16damons-hot-as-hell
please update
10/19/2011 c2 23Yuki-n-Shuichi4evrfan33
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY! Another chapter finally! I like it! NOOOOOOOOOOOO EIRI DON'T DIE! I can try and give you ideas if you need me to, oh by the way, have you ever gotten a chance to read the femShuichi story I finished? Hope you can update really soon!
10/6/2011 c1 XxX
Big round butt and Double D's? This could turn into an interesting porno.
9/27/2011 c1 Eternally Retold
Hmn... I kind of like how your plot is going, though your story needs more detail. You need work on your grammar a little- no... ALOT more!
When I meant detail, /I mean/ detail. You have to give thought on how Shuichi would think and his reactions to Yuki's cold-hearted demeanor.
Yuki seemed out-of-character to me, to be honest. Read all of Gravitation again to get the feel of how each character is in his/her way and their interactions with each other. You need to type out what you think they are about to do.
You also need a theasaurus. (Not sure if I spelled that word right.) It should be useful and you'll learn new words to use! w
Anyways, I bid you good luck~!
...Eternally Retold.
9/27/2011 c1 epic fail
Learn ENGLISH GRAMMAR before posting anything else!

This is utterly DREADFUL!

You have Zero Talent.
9/26/2011 c2 2L and misa for eternity
i really like your story it is pretty good. i hope there is more to come i can hardly wait for the nexted chapter. good luck on it
9/24/2011 c2 lilgurlanima
what did tohma exactly do for them to separate like that?
7/11/2011 c1 SpongeyCashewNut
Check your spelling and grammar. Also, please indent it...it's a blob of text. The transition is...kind of choppy and rushed. Work on the flow. And plus, making one of the guys in the BL coupling ruins the image of BL. It's quite descriptive though.
5/20/2011 c1 lilgurlanima
that's a good start... i wanna know the mystery and secret of shuichi further.. pls check th spelling... goodluck! :)
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