for Escape8/16/2022 c19 
14Clinio
I still have to get there, but I'm worried that Hermione hasn't interacted with Ron yet.
You can't rebuild or build a relationship if they don't start interacting with each other, and it's already clear from the nature of the fic that this isn't going to be an AU crush.
14ClinioI still have to get there, but I'm worried that Hermione hasn't interacted with Ron yet.
You can't rebuild or build a relationship if they don't start interacting with each other, and it's already clear from the nature of the fic that this isn't going to be an AU crush.
8/27/2021 c27 rasmidas95672
Honestly? This is really in another level. But how can one person make Ron to come in that place where he is only being insulted. I don't think everyone insult him. After all if not him, Harry wouldn't have even be able to get to the soccerers stone. N here Ron taking Hermione without making her realise the mistake she has done. Need improvement in plot to be honest. Apart that writing is ok.
Honestly? This is really in another level. But how can one person make Ron to come in that place where he is only being insulted. I don't think everyone insult him. After all if not him, Harry wouldn't have even be able to get to the soccerers stone. N here Ron taking Hermione without making her realise the mistake she has done. Need improvement in plot to be honest. Apart that writing is ok.
8/27/2021 c8 rasmidas95672
I really think Hermione is the wrong one here. It's there in most of the stories making Hermione the superior one and Ron look like some idoit one. Always he can be the one is wrong. N Hermione is not any God to never make mistakes. N coming to Harry and Ron, Ron can be a better auror too. Just bcoz he was the chosen one doesn't mean his wandwork was better than Ron. It's really saddening that even in R/Hr fanfics, Ron is given the weak base in both relationship or friendship.
I really think Hermione is the wrong one here. It's there in most of the stories making Hermione the superior one and Ron look like some idoit one. Always he can be the one is wrong. N Hermione is not any God to never make mistakes. N coming to Harry and Ron, Ron can be a better auror too. Just bcoz he was the chosen one doesn't mean his wandwork was better than Ron. It's really saddening that even in R/Hr fanfics, Ron is given the weak base in both relationship or friendship.
8/7/2021 c33 Pursharth Garg
Does Hermione apologize? No.
Does she grow as a character? No.
Does Hermione apologize? No.
Does she grow as a character? No.
11/17/2020 c15 Guest
You do know that Monsieur is not a first name right?
You do know that Monsieur is not a first name right?
7/28/2020 c33 marlene
I loved your story! It was so well written, I was glad you weren’t a Ron hater as most fan fictions always bash him.I liked how Ron got a taste of the single life and finally got his was nice how you accurately portrayed Rons character and your sassy rants were funny. I really liked him with Clèmence,if things went differently they would’ve been a nice couple. But in the end his heart always belonged to Hermione.I do think she should’ve apologized for the things she did but still this story was great! : )
I loved your story! It was so well written, I was glad you weren’t a Ron hater as most fan fictions always bash him.I liked how Ron got a taste of the single life and finally got his was nice how you accurately portrayed Rons character and your sassy rants were funny. I really liked him with Clèmence,if things went differently they would’ve been a nice couple. But in the end his heart always belonged to Hermione.I do think she should’ve apologized for the things she did but still this story was great! : )
7/29/2020 c33 marlene505
I loved your story! You wrote it very well.I liked how you weren’t a Ron hater as most fan fictions always hate on cool that Ron got a taste of the single life and had his portrayed Ron accurately, he was funny,sassy,smart,and courageous at the right times.I liked Clèmence, if things had went differently her and Ronald would’ve been a nice his heart belonged to Hermione. It was cute how he would constantly have Hermione on his mind even in the most serious of times. Having that Cannon ball was a nice touch to represent there relationship. Also your sassy rants were funny. Your story is good because it realistically showed the characters life after Hogwarts and the war.I don’t think everyone would get married right away and live happily ever after. They would have to struggle through adulthood and breakups and stuff. Anyways great story and I hope you come back to this site and post more! : )
I loved your story! You wrote it very well.I liked how you weren’t a Ron hater as most fan fictions always hate on cool that Ron got a taste of the single life and had his portrayed Ron accurately, he was funny,sassy,smart,and courageous at the right times.I liked Clèmence, if things had went differently her and Ronald would’ve been a nice his heart belonged to Hermione. It was cute how he would constantly have Hermione on his mind even in the most serious of times. Having that Cannon ball was a nice touch to represent there relationship. Also your sassy rants were funny. Your story is good because it realistically showed the characters life after Hogwarts and the war.I don’t think everyone would get married right away and live happily ever after. They would have to struggle through adulthood and breakups and stuff. Anyways great story and I hope you come back to this site and post more! : )
10/20/2019 c33 Guest
Hello, I have read this story 2 years or so ago. I am a huge Romione fan that after reading this years ago, I remembered being disappointed by the not that much romance between my favorite couple. Now, after re reading this I was very satisfied and in awe on how you showcased Ron's flaws and strength. I guessed time did something on me that I now have a more mature mindset and I was able to appreciate this story more. I wish you well, dear author.
Hello, I have read this story 2 years or so ago. I am a huge Romione fan that after reading this years ago, I remembered being disappointed by the not that much romance between my favorite couple. Now, after re reading this I was very satisfied and in awe on how you showcased Ron's flaws and strength. I guessed time did something on me that I now have a more mature mindset and I was able to appreciate this story more. I wish you well, dear author.
11/24/2018 c33 Niel2804
can you comeback? we don't have many ron centric ff, i really like escape and dragon heart
can you comeback? we don't have many ron centric ff, i really like escape and dragon heart
7/12/2017 c33 BuzzWeasley
wow...just simply wow
the plot,characterization and everything else was simply AWESOME. i know its several years after you finished it but i just wanted to let you know that i love your story and please dont stop writing, you dont see a good ron-centric story everyday
wow...just simply wow
the plot,characterization and everything else was simply AWESOME. i know its several years after you finished it but i just wanted to let you know that i love your story and please dont stop writing, you dont see a good ron-centric story everyday
4/21/2016 c23 Vic96
Hi, I only found your fanfic yesterday and I haven't read anybody else's reviews, but from your rants at the top (which are fab and fun to read) I'd say you've had a few bad reviews! So far I'm loving it. It's a nice change on the norm and your little rants at the top have honestly had me laughing out loud . Anyway...back to reading it...
Hi, I only found your fanfic yesterday and I haven't read anybody else's reviews, but from your rants at the top (which are fab and fun to read) I'd say you've had a few bad reviews! So far I'm loving it. It's a nice change on the norm and your little rants at the top have honestly had me laughing out loud . Anyway...back to reading it...
11/18/2015 c33 2Wallman Tenebrae
Duh... really horrible...
1) Ron is too out of character. I don't know why you guys don't realise that he had matured after he came back in DH. Rowling just mentioned it in one paragraph. Harry was always thinking about hallows and Hermione was irritated at both of them. In those months Ron became the leader and motivated them. He changed his habit of saying without thinking. Also, he faced war, saw his brother die along with many others, and killed greyback. How can you still write him as immature, insensitive idiot and be praised for it is beyond me.
2) I get that you're a romione shipper, but don't force it where it shouldn't be. Hermione didn't change an ounce in this. You yourself said that she had big flaws. How will they be happy again? She didn't apologise even once, yet Ron takes her back, and wow, they get engaged less than a thousand words later. Way to be a doormat and a loser, Ron. Blokes leave girls like this in reality.
Simply terrible.
2Wallman TenebraeDuh... really horrible...
1) Ron is too out of character. I don't know why you guys don't realise that he had matured after he came back in DH. Rowling just mentioned it in one paragraph. Harry was always thinking about hallows and Hermione was irritated at both of them. In those months Ron became the leader and motivated them. He changed his habit of saying without thinking. Also, he faced war, saw his brother die along with many others, and killed greyback. How can you still write him as immature, insensitive idiot and be praised for it is beyond me.
2) I get that you're a romione shipper, but don't force it where it shouldn't be. Hermione didn't change an ounce in this. You yourself said that she had big flaws. How will they be happy again? She didn't apologise even once, yet Ron takes her back, and wow, they get engaged less than a thousand words later. Way to be a doormat and a loser, Ron. Blokes leave girls like this in reality.
Simply terrible.
7/12/2015 c32 Very lame ending
This chapter was a mess. Ron and Hermione go from hardly speaking to being engaged in less than 1,000 words. Totally unbelievable and disappointing.
Not to mention that Ron just takes Hermione back without any apologies or contrition on her part whatsoever. It makes him look like a doormat and a loser. One of those guys who lets their wife or girlfriend control every aspect of their lives. Hermione insults him publicly, dumps him, cheats on him, and lies to him, and never apologizes. Yet he asks her to marry him.
Is this supposed to be a happy ending for Ron, ending up with such a manipulative harpy? Are we as readers supposed to like Hermione when she has no redeeming qualities whatsoever?
This was quite a stunning display of the wheels falling off a story.
This chapter was a mess. Ron and Hermione go from hardly speaking to being engaged in less than 1,000 words. Totally unbelievable and disappointing.
Not to mention that Ron just takes Hermione back without any apologies or contrition on her part whatsoever. It makes him look like a doormat and a loser. One of those guys who lets their wife or girlfriend control every aspect of their lives. Hermione insults him publicly, dumps him, cheats on him, and lies to him, and never apologizes. Yet he asks her to marry him.
Is this supposed to be a happy ending for Ron, ending up with such a manipulative harpy? Are we as readers supposed to like Hermione when she has no redeeming qualities whatsoever?
This was quite a stunning display of the wheels falling off a story.