
6/2/2012 c1
2peeta.mellark1
That is hilarious! i love it. You should make a longer story!
BTW Haymitch is funny:)

That is hilarious! i love it. You should make a longer story!
BTW Haymitch is funny:)
3/25/2012 c1
25greenkittycat
:D I like Haymitch's world. I think I shall live.in it with him and Gilligan the butterfly.

:D I like Haymitch's world. I think I shall live.in it with him and Gilligan the butterfly.
1/12/2012 c1 tawnyangel
(1) I'm to lazy (like Haymitch) to log in. But you can look me up. ;0
(2) I love Haymitch! And I was wondering if I could use this idea for a chapter story? I would really appreciate it.
(3) the grammar/ spelling are good. Well I actually can't tell ya 'bout spelling. But the grammer's good.
Pm me,
~tawnyangel~
(1) I'm to lazy (like Haymitch) to log in. But you can look me up. ;0
(2) I love Haymitch! And I was wondering if I could use this idea for a chapter story? I would really appreciate it.
(3) the grammar/ spelling are good. Well I actually can't tell ya 'bout spelling. But the grammer's good.
Pm me,
~tawnyangel~
11/15/2011 c1
2TheCruciatus
Write more xD I seriously cannot wait for the next chapter. This is just too funny xDDD

Write more xD I seriously cannot wait for the next chapter. This is just too funny xDDD
6/19/2011 c1
5thatgirltasha2
Hahaha... You should write a book! This is really good! Hahaha.. (still laughing) :D

Hahaha... You should write a book! This is really good! Hahaha.. (still laughing) :D
5/26/2011 c1
39MirroringShadows
Haymitch's drunken mind was highly amusing. The only thing that threw me off were the grammatical errors. Otherwise, I liked it quite a bit.

Haymitch's drunken mind was highly amusing. The only thing that threw me off were the grammatical errors. Otherwise, I liked it quite a bit.
5/24/2011 c1
47DobbyLovesSocks
That is absolutely positively HILARIOUS! my friend emailed me the link to your story, and i am SO glad she did! that is amazingly funny.
A. W. E. S. O. M. E. N. E. S. S!

That is absolutely positively HILARIOUS! my friend emailed me the link to your story, and i am SO glad she did! that is amazingly funny.
A. W. E. S. O. M. E. N. E. S. S!
5/17/2011 c1
29Howlynn
wasnt it hay's game that had the evil biting butterfly's - i don't see whay he'd like them and if it was meant sarcasticly - it doesn't come across well. ramp it up a bit to make it more Hay. Also the government fell and It has changed the whole world - but the twinky factory survived? and how do you break a door bell -with a twinky? You have a good story started - you just have some fact check things that sort of shift the final impression off a bit. Thanks for sharing.

wasnt it hay's game that had the evil biting butterfly's - i don't see whay he'd like them and if it was meant sarcasticly - it doesn't come across well. ramp it up a bit to make it more Hay. Also the government fell and It has changed the whole world - but the twinky factory survived? and how do you break a door bell -with a twinky? You have a good story started - you just have some fact check things that sort of shift the final impression off a bit. Thanks for sharing.