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1/13/2016 c1 Guest
i am so confused! when some is talking you put " air quotes" around it. not only on some of them. please fix because it's really confusing.
5/27/2015 c5 2Sparklybutterflies1
Thank you. I appreciate you will take the time to make the sentence structures better. I thought I was going to have to struggle through the rest of the story.
5/27/2015 c4 Sparklybutterflies1
What does Mikan have against her mother?
8/18/2013 c5 AngelKitty27
8/13/2013 c4 10TECKK
me gusta por favor actualiza pronto
4/20/2013 c5 TECKK
por favor actualiza esta historia es genial
11/16/2012 c5 mcr
f u tink this is rubbish but think its good great even and should continue if you really wanna improve do chapter 5 and let ppl see youve grown up let me see the changes but s ur choice not mine so yeah good luck
10/24/2012 c5 Secret
kwl for a 'immature' teen which you were NOT that was good but its great your gonna improve coz then ppl will realize how much hard work and effort you put into it
7/11/2012 c5 MilkyAngel
Please write the story as soon as you can i really like reading this story even though it's not specific or even if it's too childish so good luck in your next story _
7/6/2012 c1 Guest
You wrote mark instead of Marvin
12/26/2011 c4 aliyah1972
11/27/2011 c1 2Errant Ember
crispier than a bacon?
11/20/2011 c3 4Everblossom
R U STILL GONNA CONTINUE THIS STORY cause its... SO GREAT i love these types of stories filled with betrayl,romance,hate, and mystery
11/14/2011 c1 XmiChiX


Update soon
6/3/2011 c3 SecondChances2
tell me! i wanna know! when's the next chapter?
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