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5/17/2011 c2 8postlux
okay, i really love this. 3
5/17/2011 c2 12Cassy-Kay
This is great!

I absolutely love it, this chapter especially. I recently started writing fan fic and I know how long it takes to write and edit these chapters and I usually only have around 3 thousand words. This had to be well of 5.

my only suggestion is, if you are trying to make it realistic, is that school doesn't really start in america until the end of august (august 28th or 29th) or even a lot of schools don't start until september 6th or 7th. it depends on where you are but Kim would still be on summer vacation.

I just wanted to let you know but otherwise just update soon! I'm loving this!
5/17/2011 c2 bleu2979
Hey I really loved this chapter and thanks for the shout out! Sorry I couldn't log in last time I was in a rush and knew I would forget about it later. Ugh! Stupid Paul! Maybe for next chapter she could meet all the guys ( but still not find out about you know what) at Emilys or something
5/17/2011 c2 Just a Girl INACTIVE
Well I can definitely see you're a wolf girl! :)

I'm thoroughly addicted to your stories now and I will be as ever waiting for an update. I like the story of Kim and Jared, it's not something I've read before so I'm very much looking forward to this new experience!

See you in the next chapter!
5/17/2011 c2 2Aigoo
Wow I like your story so much ! It's so funny ! I hope you'll make them going out together real soon ! And happy :) but not too soon, it won't be funny :D

Update soon !
5/17/2011 c2 2Sugar-Ice
enjoyed this chapter alot, especially the jared paul relationship very funny! Please update soon!
5/16/2011 c1 Princess2979
I write dates august 5, 2011 but it's not confusing if you write it Monday, august 5
5/16/2011 c1 5Tessa Anne
i really like it...please continue...i want to see how kim's and jared's relationship evolves...no one knows really much about them, so it would be very nice to know
5/16/2011 c1 8postlux
we don't usually usually write "monday" aka, day. we'll just write month or whatever. example, May 16, 2011.

&we'll see where this goes.
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