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8/2 c1 49OPS Manager
LOL! This is so good.
10/13/2018 c3 marjoriefoster
Great story. I love your style. Thanks
8/13/2018 c2 typroctor-ewaguy
I guess I can see where these two are going. You're an excellent writer and I'm enjoying this fan fiction. If whatever I'm reading gives me a good feeling I think that's all we can expect of a writer. Well done.
8/13/2018 c1 typroctor-ewaguy
I understand why Deeks would not kiss her, but I guess he proved to Kensi he was capable if he made Kensi tremble.I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Well done writer.
3/10/2018 c3 typroctor-ewaguy
This is the first fiction of yours that I just finished and it was amazing. I'll be reading more.
7/24/2014 c3 HLMMMM
My god... You're writing is so fantastic! You had me laughing out loud and tensing in anticipation... Seriously, you are very talented!
10/11/2013 c3 Michelle
Clap, clap, clap, clap, clap, clap, clap! Very good!
9/30/2013 c3 pony.april
OMG the hotness is wow. One of the best love scenes I have ever read.
5/4/2013 c1 Guest
WHY DID YOU TAKE DOWN HUMAN SACRIFICE AND ALL THE OTHERS? You worked so hard writing them and I want to reread! Please put all three in the series back up I miss them so much!
4/27/2013 c3 4LizzieInk
Wow, this is incredibly well written. You have captured their characters really well. :)
4/17/2013 c3 A Person
Loved everything can you please write how they react at work.
4/17/2013 c2 A Person
Pulls me in amazing! Loved it!
4/17/2013 c1 A Person
I loved it I wish this really happened.
Amazing!
12/26/2012 c2 F Maurice
Well, Kensi asked and she got her answer.
12/26/2012 c1 F Maurice
Really good. I like that both Marty and Kensi felt shaken.
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