for How Far We Have Come5/20/2011 c1 
27WobblyJelly
Hello, you see me =)
Yeah, it's short, but my first fanfic was short too, so don't worry. Besides, this story made me feel fuzzy and warm on the inside.
You did a great job. I don't usually read Hermione/Ron fics, especially fluff ones, but I didn't mind this one. You'll be a great author.
27WobblyJellyHello, you see me =)
Yeah, it's short, but my first fanfic was short too, so don't worry. Besides, this story made me feel fuzzy and warm on the inside.
You did a great job. I don't usually read Hermione/Ron fics, especially fluff ones, but I didn't mind this one. You'll be a great author.
5/19/2011 c1 Emmycate8
Annie! I loved it... It was a bit sappy but it was still amazing! I could hear ur voice. Im gonna follow and favorite u so keep writing!
Annie! I loved it... It was a bit sappy but it was still amazing! I could hear ur voice. Im gonna follow and favorite u so keep writing!
5/18/2011 c1 2meercat-DR
Hi! I got your message so this is me, giving you a review :)
Firstly, congrats on your first fanfic! I wouldn't worry that it's short. I mean my first chapter was really short too! I really enjoyed reading it, just the simplicity and how you managed to slide in actual incidents from the books. That was smart :) And I guess it was nice to see a softer side to them, especially Ron.
There's really no criticism for me to offer you. It was a job well done. If I had to be picky? A couple of spelling and grammar issues here and there but I'm guilty of that too... Looking forward to reading more of your work!
MeercatDR
2meercat-DRHi! I got your message so this is me, giving you a review :)
Firstly, congrats on your first fanfic! I wouldn't worry that it's short. I mean my first chapter was really short too! I really enjoyed reading it, just the simplicity and how you managed to slide in actual incidents from the books. That was smart :) And I guess it was nice to see a softer side to them, especially Ron.
There's really no criticism for me to offer you. It was a job well done. If I had to be picky? A couple of spelling and grammar issues here and there but I'm guilty of that too... Looking forward to reading more of your work!
MeercatDR
5/16/2011 c1 5wordsflyoffthepage
Loved it! Yes, longer would have been nice, but short and sweet is always great as well. Congrats on your first story! I like near the end, when Ron is looking at Hermione and thinking about her, while Hermione is looking at Ron and thinking about him. I just thought that part was very nicely written! Great work! And keep on writing!
5wordsflyoffthepageLoved it! Yes, longer would have been nice, but short and sweet is always great as well. Congrats on your first story! I like near the end, when Ron is looking at Hermione and thinking about her, while Hermione is looking at Ron and thinking about him. I just thought that part was very nicely written! Great work! And keep on writing!