for Dear Good life right?12/21/2012 c3 
8Imagilove
it's good. it's just a little scattered. sounds kinda hyper on pixie sticks or something.
lol. that leads to fun things in stories though... :)
8Imagiloveit's good. it's just a little scattered. sounds kinda hyper on pixie sticks or something.
lol. that leads to fun things in stories though... :)
10/24/2011 c4 24TheOneWhoWritesJH
This is the same chapter as last time. But niether the less... He aint gotta feel like that :)
24TheOneWhoWritesJHThis is the same chapter as last time. But niether the less... He aint gotta feel like that :)
10/5/2011 c2 24TheOneWhoWritesJH
Aww im gonna kill him for forgetting his daughter. Family first, job second! Follow that, dude! lol great story!
24TheOneWhoWritesJHAww im gonna kill him for forgetting his daughter. Family first, job second! Follow that, dude! lol great story!
5/17/2011 c1 GreatStory
I really like it so far. The grammer needs some improvements, but you should keep going i can't wait to see what happens next.
I really like it so far. The grammer needs some improvements, but you should keep going i can't wait to see what happens next.