for The House That Jack Built9/22/2003 c1 whipper
a great jack story, *like it* thank you.
a great jack story, *like it* thank you.
5/21/2002 c1 
40Karen T
Wow, Kat, this story is...wow. Just wow. You've done a fabulous job capturing the essence of Jack Bristow: a man whose life is littered with regret and blame, but who also has hope for the future. The emotions in this story are so real that I felt as if I was experiencing them right along with Jack. Thanks so much for a delightful read!
40Karen TWow, Kat, this story is...wow. Just wow. You've done a fabulous job capturing the essence of Jack Bristow: a man whose life is littered with regret and blame, but who also has hope for the future. The emotions in this story are so real that I felt as if I was experiencing them right along with Jack. Thanks so much for a delightful read!
5/3/2002 c1 natalie
Very well written. It's great to see someone step into the mind of Jack Bristow. By the way, have you ever read Judyth Hill poetry? (just asking b/c of your title)
Very well written. It's great to see someone step into the mind of Jack Bristow. By the way, have you ever read Judyth Hill poetry? (just asking b/c of your title)
4/28/2002 c1 42Celli
Good story. Jack's a hard character to understand (and an even harder one to write, in my experience), but this does a great job of building him up, step by step, into the man we saw in the pilot. Wow.
42CelliGood story. Jack's a hard character to understand (and an even harder one to write, in my experience), but this does a great job of building him up, step by step, into the man we saw in the pilot. Wow.
4/17/2002 c1 4Fanatic482
oh wow... that was just friggin awesome! nice to see jack's "human" side for once =)
4Fanatic482oh wow... that was just friggin awesome! nice to see jack's "human" side for once =)
4/8/2002 c1 Sherry
wow! That was phenomenal. By far one of the best Alias/Jack Bristow fics I've read.
Thanks for the experience.
wow! That was phenomenal. By far one of the best Alias/Jack Bristow fics I've read.
Thanks for the experience.
4/7/2002 c1 Link
Your fic reads like a spy novel! You are a very talented writer, keep up the great work.
I loved the look into Jack's mind-he is the best character on ALIAS.
Your fic reads like a spy novel! You are a very talented writer, keep up the great work.
I loved the look into Jack's mind-he is the best character on ALIAS.
4/4/2002 c1 Jen
Absolutely stunning! Just brilliantly done. Victor Garber does so much with just a look and you captured what is behind all those looks so beautifully.
Absolutely stunning! Just brilliantly done. Victor Garber does so much with just a look and you captured what is behind all those looks so beautifully.
4/4/2002 c1 44icyfire
Kat, first I must compliment the title. I like it a lot. I also like the story. Jack's my favorite character, and I love reading stories about him. The angst is high and good. ;)
"He marked the envelope Sydney Bristow and ticked the box beneath 'Priority,' then placed it back underneath his bed." Ah, how Jack. One step forward, one step back.
Loved the scenes with Sydney the most.
44icyfireKat, first I must compliment the title. I like it a lot. I also like the story. Jack's my favorite character, and I love reading stories about him. The angst is high and good. ;)
"He marked the envelope Sydney Bristow and ticked the box beneath 'Priority,' then placed it back underneath his bed." Ah, how Jack. One step forward, one step back.
Loved the scenes with Sydney the most.
4/4/2002 c1 Leah
Wow! Loved your photos in a box method of telling Jack's story.
Wow! Loved your photos in a box method of telling Jack's story.
4/4/2002 c1 51pharo
I was all set with my nice review and all and then IE ate it...argh.
"There were a certain number of assumptions that accompanied Jack Bristow. All of them were true, unless you looked a little deeper."
I loved that line. Absolutely brilliant and so true. I loved what you've done in this fic. I could feel Jack's sadness and pain with the knowledge of all he could've been, but never got the chance to be. I loved the little softie in him that refused to wholly believe Laura's betrayal even though a part of him saw it all along. You portrayed Laura in a different way than I've seen in other fics, but I think it worked wonderfully. Great work.
51pharoI was all set with my nice review and all and then IE ate it...argh.
"There were a certain number of assumptions that accompanied Jack Bristow. All of them were true, unless you looked a little deeper."
I loved that line. Absolutely brilliant and so true. I loved what you've done in this fic. I could feel Jack's sadness and pain with the knowledge of all he could've been, but never got the chance to be. I loved the little softie in him that refused to wholly believe Laura's betrayal even though a part of him saw it all along. You portrayed Laura in a different way than I've seen in other fics, but I think it worked wonderfully. Great work.
4/4/2002 c1 44angela evans
Ooooooh! Sooo good, just like your other piece! I've got to run or i'll be late to class (see how good your fic is?)
44angela evansOoooooh! Sooo good, just like your other piece! I've got to run or i'll be late to class (see how good your fic is?)