for When She cries8/3/2011 c3 RainLoverGirl101
I really like your story. i would be happy to be your co writer, as long as u tell me how to add a chapter. i dont know how and ineed help. im getting hate mail. lol
I really like your story. i would be happy to be your co writer, as long as u tell me how to add a chapter. i dont know how and ineed help. im getting hate mail. lol
7/30/2011 c2 
14emeralgreenlove
IF THIS WASNT CRAMMED TOGETHER IT WOULD LOOK WAY BETTER. PLZ MAKE IT AT LEAST A LIL UT LONGER
14emeralgreenloveIF THIS WASNT CRAMMED TOGETHER IT WOULD LOOK WAY BETTER. PLZ MAKE IT AT LEAST A LIL UT LONGER
7/30/2011 c1 emeralgreenlove
THIS IS GOOD BUT I THINK YOU SHOULD BE MORE DESCRIPTIVE I FEEL LIKE YOU ARE GOIING THROUGH THIS TOO FAST, THAT YOURE RUSHING. MY ADVICE IS: SLOW DOWN, TAKE YOUR TIME ITLL BE WORTH IT TRUST ME.
~EMERALGREENLOVE~
THIS IS GOOD BUT I THINK YOU SHOULD BE MORE DESCRIPTIVE I FEEL LIKE YOU ARE GOIING THROUGH THIS TOO FAST, THAT YOURE RUSHING. MY ADVICE IS: SLOW DOWN, TAKE YOUR TIME ITLL BE WORTH IT TRUST ME.
~EMERALGREENLOVE~
7/29/2011 c3 8theuglyswaninlove
Ohhhhh update update! I can't wait to see protective Fang! THIS IS AMAZING
8theuglyswaninloveOhhhhh update update! I can't wait to see protective Fang! THIS IS AMAZING
6/22/2011 c2 megan41097
this is a really good but sad story u should keep writing like this type of story is uncommon from the storys ive read KEEP WRITING PLEASE!
this is a really good but sad story u should keep writing like this type of story is uncommon from the storys ive read KEEP WRITING PLEASE!
6/10/2011 c1 3MaximumRideFanAddict
It/s good but you should start a new paragraph everytime someone talks.
3MaximumRideFanAddictIt/s good but you should start a new paragraph everytime someone talks.