for Unraveled1/12/2014 c1 Simone
I am a huge fan of Emma Frost, especially her time with Generation X, and I thought your work was beautifully crafted. Thank you for that! You hit the nail on the head with Emma's characterization and your story was very catching. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to anything else you develop in regard to my favorite urbane telepath.
I am a huge fan of Emma Frost, especially her time with Generation X, and I thought your work was beautifully crafted. Thank you for that! You hit the nail on the head with Emma's characterization and your story was very catching. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to anything else you develop in regard to my favorite urbane telepath.
5/19/2011 c1 
2Bookwyrm
I was thinking Inception too, from the moment little Jubilee shows up.
Good characterization. A bit rough on the use of dialog tags and pacing, but the characters all sound like themselves even to someone not paying attention to the latest X-Men stories (aside from what you mention when I visit your house, of course).
2BookwyrmI was thinking Inception too, from the moment little Jubilee shows up.
Good characterization. A bit rough on the use of dialog tags and pacing, but the characters all sound like themselves even to someone not paying attention to the latest X-Men stories (aside from what you mention when I visit your house, of course).
5/18/2011 c1 DigiRanma
Great story, loved the stuff between Emma and Jubes, especially the 'Barbie' comment.
Great story, loved the stuff between Emma and Jubes, especially the 'Barbie' comment.