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6/6/2019 c1 Pony of chaos17
XD so epicly funny
8/6/2017 c1 9Ender NightBlade
Hahaha vengeance on Trollestia!
8/5/2015 c1 2ChuckNorris'ssister
Oooooooooooh luna, you slick motherfuckerXD
Never change luna, never change
3/17/2015 c1 2SmartGirl333
moar
for the love of god
moar
PORTAL PONIES PURE GOLD
11/19/2014 c1 Anonymous
XD That was the perfect thing to do those two cores!
9/5/2013 c1 Keighlyn
Well ok dennn its really funny plees write more
2/24/2013 c1 Adventure Sphere
So, this is what happened to those two, huh? NEVER MIND ABOUT THE CORE ORBITING AROUND THE SUN, HUH?! GET ME OUT OF HERE, I'M GOING TO OVERHEAT!
1/29/2013 c1 279Petchricor
Luna you little jerk XD
1/27/2013 c1 4TwilightSky15
Awsome! Plz continue!
8/29/2012 c1 Guest
I don't know if your aware but the reason aperture was still abandoned in portal 2 and everything looks like an apocalypse was due to the combine invasion from the half-life seires which is directly connected to the portal universe as they are one and the same. So a dragon apocalypse would be fairly impossible, seeing as how earth is currently home to a military so advanced with weapons so powerful that only an army of millions of highly armed gorilla warfarers could combat without being obliterated.
1/9/2012 c1 9Twilit Feline
This story is awesome. I love the note Luna left. Its like saying,

"Hey Tia. Some strange beings that we know absolutely nothing about came to Equestria last night! And I thought it would be a great idea to bring them into Canterlot

Castle!

- Luna"

Anyway love the story.
10/12/2011 c1 11the good dr
LOL Trollestia got trolled.

signed the good dr.
8/20/2011 c1 xxxinactive
I enjoyed this. Wheatley and Luna have so much in common. LAWL
6/26/2011 c1 AzureOptical
Hmmm. I'm going to be honest with this one.

The story is fairly entertaining, the plot itself is chuckle-worthy.

Luna and Space Core are done quite well, much better than it could have been. The only thing that irks me is that Wheatley's characterization could have been better written. I just can't really imagine him saying a lot of the dialogue you gave him. And what I mean by that is, your heart's in the right spot but the extra mile goes ungone. Take my view with a grain of salt, however. I'm just a big stickler on realistic dialogue.

I like the detail you have about the cores being able to turn on their own, it's certainly something unique, for lack of a better word.

The note Luna wrote to her sister at the end is a well enough rounded, if not slightly funny, ending.

There should be an epilogue to this. Wheaters and Space get jobs in the castle or around Ponyville, and Wheatley being Wheatley, and Space Core being... Space Core, you could write a nice comedy, something like a novelette. I would certainly enjoy it!
6/25/2011 c1 9Star1412
amazing! i never would have thought to mix My Little Pony and Portal. It's funny. I like the orb that's obsessed with space.
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