3/20/2013 c2 GY
Please update soon and keep it up! I like how you wrote their POV's. You gave good reason for Syrena's behavior and stayed true to her nature which is suppose to be mermaid, not pathetic at all. Yet you incorporated perfectly how her perception of Philip changed in the turn of events. What a great work! Keep it up!

5/30/2011 c2 Guest
Please keep writing, this pairing is awesome and your writing is incredible .

5/26/2011 c2 3Rockstorm
Hey, I like it so far. =) I don't see any errors or anything-sounds good!

5/23/2011 c2 Sushiness21
Hello! You're the first Philip/Syrena story I read and I chose wisely! :) I'll wait for the next chapters and please keep it up!

Sushiness

5/23/2011 c2 Synchrochic333
I luvv this story! R u gonna do the entire movie in Syrena's POV? Please do!

5/23/2011 c2 17PoFS
I like the simplistic manner of Syrena's thoughts, not as in-depth as a human's but strangely unique and intriguing, and based off of instinct. I like that she didn't consider saving him, she just did.

PoFS

5/23/2011 c2 ableon
Very nice chapter. I like the way you portray Syrena and the other mermaids. Quite convincing and appropriate. Update soon. I'm following this story hehe