5/21/2011 c1 OneAcquaintedWithTheNight
It's great so far! I can't wait to see where it goes! Btw its very well written

Hope u update soon!

:D

5/21/2011 c1 17PoFS
A wonderful characterization, understanding that with Syrena liberties can be taking as we don't know much about her.

Well done.

PoFS

5/21/2011 c1 40Setsumi-san
Aww, what a nice introspective. The characterization was spot on. I love this couple and hope to see more stories about them by you.