for The Pack Imperative12/20/2022 c30 Lisa D. Lloyd
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE come back an finish this story I'm dying to see how it all turns outI've been reading it for years so come back...
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE come back an finish this story I'm dying to see how it all turns outI've been reading it for years so come back...
5/16/2022 c30 SarahanjoMiller
This FF is one of my all time favorites. I hope that you will write so much more of it. Thank you so much for sharing this version of the Twilight world with us. I can't tell you how much I love this it. the way you write draws you I. so completely that when reading it I tend to for get my surroundings.
This FF is one of my all time favorites. I hope that you will write so much more of it. Thank you so much for sharing this version of the Twilight world with us. I can't tell you how much I love this it. the way you write draws you I. so completely that when reading it I tend to for get my surroundings.
3/25/2022 c30 PrettyGirlBPD13
It’s been many years since I first fell in love with this story, back when you were regularly updating, and it’s still my favorite Twilight fic. Now that you’ve confirmed you’re unlikely to ever continue it, I’d love if you could give us an idea of where it was headed especially since your new original work isn’t following the same path.
It’s been many years since I first fell in love with this story, back when you were regularly updating, and it’s still my favorite Twilight fic. Now that you’ve confirmed you’re unlikely to ever continue it, I’d love if you could give us an idea of where it was headed especially since your new original work isn’t following the same path.
3/22/2022 c30 Guest
Omg I was so happy the moment I saw you had updated a chapter
I loved it. Their relationship is so amazing. Even when it is mending
Thank you so much for writing
Omg I was so happy the moment I saw you had updated a chapter
I loved it. Their relationship is so amazing. Even when it is mending
Thank you so much for writing
3/19/2022 c30 
7Hanikka
OMG, I couldn’t believe I saw an update. Thank you so much for continuing this story! There are some who don’t like it apparently but all they can do is not to read it. Simple as that. There are lots of us who do love it and have been hoping you to come back. Thank you!
7HanikkaOMG, I couldn’t believe I saw an update. Thank you so much for continuing this story! There are some who don’t like it apparently but all they can do is not to read it. Simple as that. There are lots of us who do love it and have been hoping you to come back. Thank you!
3/19/2022 c30 2Kells618
I’m so glad you updated! I LOVE this story! I have been watching for an update! Hopefully you are able to update again soon!
2Kells618I’m so glad you updated! I LOVE this story! I have been watching for an update! Hopefully you are able to update again soon!
2/1/2022 c14 Shadow Queen
I’ve really been trying with this story because I like the idea. However, I don’t like the way the guys go from freaking Bella like a woman to treating her like a child. The fact they actually believe they have to right physically discipline Bella is horrible. They don’t get to spank her because she says something they don’t like. Paul always trying to hand feed her…sounds like he needs to talk to someone and deal with last traumas. Do they want a mate or a child? They’re so focused on what they want to do, but they don’t care what she wants, her needs her feelings, unless it gives them what they want. It seems like an abusive relationship.
I’ve really been trying with this story because I like the idea. However, I don’t like the way the guys go from freaking Bella like a woman to treating her like a child. The fact they actually believe they have to right physically discipline Bella is horrible. They don’t get to spank her because she says something they don’t like. Paul always trying to hand feed her…sounds like he needs to talk to someone and deal with last traumas. Do they want a mate or a child? They’re so focused on what they want to do, but they don’t care what she wants, her needs her feelings, unless it gives them what they want. It seems like an abusive relationship.
1/28/2022 c31 What
A reviewer said Bella had 7 wolf lovers.
I wouldn't give a dam if you weren't writing about teenagers.
It's not cute, it's vulgar.
A reviewer said Bella had 7 wolf lovers.
I wouldn't give a dam if you weren't writing about teenagers.
It's not cute, it's vulgar.
1/28/2022 c1 NoThanks
What is wrong with you all, they are teenagers for Christ sake.
Do we really have make Bella into a slut?
Instead of her having a deep beautiful relationship with Jacob
she is made a sex toy for five.
Nothing hot or beautiful about any of this.
Most Jacob/Bella fans want just that, not her being shared between a bunch of men.
Alot of under very young kids do read these stories
What is wrong with you all, they are teenagers for Christ sake.
Do we really have make Bella into a slut?
Instead of her having a deep beautiful relationship with Jacob
she is made a sex toy for five.
Nothing hot or beautiful about any of this.
Most Jacob/Bella fans want just that, not her being shared between a bunch of men.
Alot of under very young kids do read these stories
10/13/2021 c31 Debbie Hicks
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30 then suddenly Her brain with each three shattering then exploding weird words was Telepathic but could fire a fireball from her hands had Fae blood was different like Sookie Stacklehouse could sense a lot of emotins and shieldinmg then flaring her training die who made you herself was blocking her successfully but activiating taken the with they see she exposed us then tore heads with them, good going somewhere Sexually assasultd but Abused but gang Telepathically mnind raped into blood tore them then too late Murdered but destroy broke her/him/army with bitten best friends/Young ones with aliens/Vulcan torn freely Lycans with fae blood then Took Memories from alien venom train them then Suddenly her shields was Starfleet stronger Ready SIRENIX Beheaded first death tore real cords but was Cursed them to suffer a endless torment good we own you pets then As all of bruising then too late infected with werewolf venom from here with alien venom then Her screams was heard torn both then Newspapers reported a rape and death then Lost her life and memories the both rescued them the next with her/him/them good Nothingness but it came too late was not human so they Good burn them here then Nothingness Alice who done to her/him/them/aliens/Vulcan Volturi found the source oh my good she's not human so he/they/them/young ones/aliens/Vulcans she was Raped gasp the Blacking outside with her/him/they/aliens/Vulcans tore both then Punished as Cullens sliced freely brought them good turned by snakes good then You two with her both others die Executed then tore freely then ashes with these ones tore freely both sides see they are extinct good then ripped freely Alice they were tortured by them gasp then they were glowing then SIRENIX! It was real a flaring flame of of Starfleet burning so they had awakened powers suddenly dressed from homes was Five bodysuits from NASA Both That's it You'r Sushi flying Long hair with bangs began chanting who Held a ward of Japanese symbols was a trained priestess Suiddenly improved her powers and preparing to fight was a trained soldier was still more firing up her powers flyong held her hands long gloves with her ward flying more graceful conuriong a fiery energy was raging Rin Jin Shi Chi Zai Kai Tou Retsu Rypu Pryu AKURYO TAISAN! viciously flaring then EVIL SPIRT BE EXORICZED! Flung her ward floating I Call my own firebird CHARGE! all of the sudden a change in her moods suddenly glowing herself screaming loudest a heavenly but angelic galactic magical light BETAZED HOT JUNGLE IGINTE! who became fiery more stronger It was real then suddenly violently highly skilled but more than trained in battle and combat who violently fired like Super Sailor Mars who was in fact from the 30th century of Crystal Tokyo Japan she was Japanese-American suddenly too late looked older by now Momma mia sakuras and wind oh my freaking god herself was not human at all anymore was a Sailor Guardian standing posed coldly with herself made a sentai speech too late her voice sounded more than adult the Protector of Betazed the Planet of telepathy the Guardian of Seduction Sailor Betazed in the name of Betazed I will fight what is Right! is Here! violently blaring so us the pretty suited sailor guardians and Knights are HERE! gasp they can't die by now they done this act they declared us/they exiled are banished on Vulcan your majesties we swear our vow to my queen urk hoo boy me rule you egghead Yikes good god man it's more murderous they caused it no way jose' yikes they are warriors..