for The Pack Imperative6/3 c16 PassionateWriter
They are not protective, they are unhealthy obsessive.
They are not protective, they are unhealthy obsessive.
12/20/2022 c30 Lisa D. Lloyd
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE come back an finish this story I'm dying to see how it all turns outI've been reading it for years so come back...
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE come back an finish this story I'm dying to see how it all turns outI've been reading it for years so come back...
5/16/2022 c30 SarahanjoMiller
This FF is one of my all time favorites. I hope that you will write so much more of it. Thank you so much for sharing this version of the Twilight world with us. I can't tell you how much I love this it. the way you write draws you I. so completely that when reading it I tend to for get my surroundings.
This FF is one of my all time favorites. I hope that you will write so much more of it. Thank you so much for sharing this version of the Twilight world with us. I can't tell you how much I love this it. the way you write draws you I. so completely that when reading it I tend to for get my surroundings.
3/25/2022 c30 PrettyGirlBPD13
It’s been many years since I first fell in love with this story, back when you were regularly updating, and it’s still my favorite Twilight fic. Now that you’ve confirmed you’re unlikely to ever continue it, I’d love if you could give us an idea of where it was headed especially since your new original work isn’t following the same path.
It’s been many years since I first fell in love with this story, back when you were regularly updating, and it’s still my favorite Twilight fic. Now that you’ve confirmed you’re unlikely to ever continue it, I’d love if you could give us an idea of where it was headed especially since your new original work isn’t following the same path.
3/22/2022 c30 Guest
Omg I was so happy the moment I saw you had updated a chapter
I loved it. Their relationship is so amazing. Even when it is mending
Thank you so much for writing
Omg I was so happy the moment I saw you had updated a chapter
I loved it. Their relationship is so amazing. Even when it is mending
Thank you so much for writing
3/19/2022 c30 
8Hanikka
OMG, I couldn’t believe I saw an update. Thank you so much for continuing this story! There are some who don’t like it apparently but all they can do is not to read it. Simple as that. There are lots of us who do love it and have been hoping you to come back. Thank you!
8HanikkaOMG, I couldn’t believe I saw an update. Thank you so much for continuing this story! There are some who don’t like it apparently but all they can do is not to read it. Simple as that. There are lots of us who do love it and have been hoping you to come back. Thank you!
3/19/2022 c30 2Kells618
I’m so glad you updated! I LOVE this story! I have been watching for an update! Hopefully you are able to update again soon!
2Kells618I’m so glad you updated! I LOVE this story! I have been watching for an update! Hopefully you are able to update again soon!
2/1/2022 c14 Shadow Queen
I’ve really been trying with this story because I like the idea. However, I don’t like the way the guys go from freaking Bella like a woman to treating her like a child. The fact they actually believe they have to right physically discipline Bella is horrible. They don’t get to spank her because she says something they don’t like. Paul always trying to hand feed her…sounds like he needs to talk to someone and deal with last traumas. Do they want a mate or a child? They’re so focused on what they want to do, but they don’t care what she wants, her needs her feelings, unless it gives them what they want. It seems like an abusive relationship.
I’ve really been trying with this story because I like the idea. However, I don’t like the way the guys go from freaking Bella like a woman to treating her like a child. The fact they actually believe they have to right physically discipline Bella is horrible. They don’t get to spank her because she says something they don’t like. Paul always trying to hand feed her…sounds like he needs to talk to someone and deal with last traumas. Do they want a mate or a child? They’re so focused on what they want to do, but they don’t care what she wants, her needs her feelings, unless it gives them what they want. It seems like an abusive relationship.
1/28/2022 c31 What
A reviewer said Bella had 7 wolf lovers.
I wouldn't give a dam if you weren't writing about teenagers.
It's not cute, it's vulgar.
A reviewer said Bella had 7 wolf lovers.
I wouldn't give a dam if you weren't writing about teenagers.
It's not cute, it's vulgar.
1/28/2022 c1 NoThanks
What is wrong with you all, they are teenagers for Christ sake.
Do we really have make Bella into a slut?
Instead of her having a deep beautiful relationship with Jacob
she is made a sex toy for five.
Nothing hot or beautiful about any of this.
Most Jacob/Bella fans want just that, not her being shared between a bunch of men.
Alot of under very young kids do read these stories
What is wrong with you all, they are teenagers for Christ sake.
Do we really have make Bella into a slut?
Instead of her having a deep beautiful relationship with Jacob
she is made a sex toy for five.
Nothing hot or beautiful about any of this.
Most Jacob/Bella fans want just that, not her being shared between a bunch of men.
Alot of under very young kids do read these stories