for Seven Minutes in Heaven2/7/2016 c1 Guest
It was okay
It was okay
5/26/2015 c1 
3COBRASTEVE
Good, good but you could have injected more detail into their closet time - embarrassment and kissing. Nice though!
3COBRASTEVEGood, good but you could have injected more detail into their closet time - embarrassment and kissing. Nice though!
7/29/2012 c1 1X Miyuki-chan X
That was cute!
I don't know if you noticed but you gave Akari a speaking part when she was supposedly in the closet.
1X Miyuki-chan XThat was cute!
I don't know if you noticed but you gave Akari a speaking part when she was supposedly in the closet.
6/5/2012 c1 FluffyPrincess6100
OK, i understand the friend thing but... GIVE ME BACK MY LEMON! This one was my favorite... *sniff*
OK, i understand the friend thing but... GIVE ME BACK MY LEMON! This one was my favorite... *sniff*
5/10/2012 c1 ohmyotps
This story is funny without the lemon, but I think it's better with it. Thank you.
This story is funny without the lemon, but I think it's better with it. Thank you.
5/9/2012 c1 13Mokuren no Ken
aww... it feels like there was something missing without lemon... TT^TT i understand wanting to show it to your friends and not wanting them to see the smuttyness though...
13Mokuren no Kenaww... it feels like there was something missing without lemon... TT^TT i understand wanting to show it to your friends and not wanting them to see the smuttyness though...
9/4/2011 c1 23whitelily5445
heheheh...that was cute! :3 i liked it...the ending was funny..good job :D
23whitelily5445heheheh...that was cute! :3 i liked it...the ending was funny..good job :D
5/29/2011 c1 Casey Wolfe
Haha! I've never read a Mitani/Akari pairing before, but now that I have, I think it's totally cute and perfect! Great little story. Maybe do a spin-off of Isumi and Waya with their time in the closet?
Haha! I've never read a Mitani/Akari pairing before, but now that I have, I think it's totally cute and perfect! Great little story. Maybe do a spin-off of Isumi and Waya with their time in the closet?
5/25/2011 c1 Ma1aika
Hahahaha ! You made me laugh so much ! Akira and Hikaru are super cute, I love Mitani (furthermore his personality is really well represented here =D), and the end with Isumi and Waya was pretty obvious but nice too^^. That was a very light and sweet oneshot, exactly as I like them... but you know what I like more ? Long stories...
Please ! A poor yaoi fangirl needs your help... make others chapters of your awesome oneshot *puppy eyes*.
Malaika.
Hahahaha ! You made me laugh so much ! Akira and Hikaru are super cute, I love Mitani (furthermore his personality is really well represented here =D), and the end with Isumi and Waya was pretty obvious but nice too^^. That was a very light and sweet oneshot, exactly as I like them... but you know what I like more ? Long stories...
Please ! A poor yaoi fangirl needs your help... make others chapters of your awesome oneshot *puppy eyes*.
Malaika.