for Naruto Uzumaki Vs The World8/10/2019 c7 
5SocialSuicideGirl
Hmmmmm that was a neat story, and I love SPVtW, but I do have to wonder about some of the adjustments you made, like why was the band thing a part of the story when it didn’t really factor in past the 1st battle of the bands thing, why didn’t you have a fun face-off against Shino like they have with Captain America in the movie? Why was Sasuke the final ex? Doesn’t the Byakugan cancel out the Sharingan or something?
...the story started out really great but then as it glossed over/departed from certain plot points from the movie I wondered if there was a good reason & it was building to something else, but yeah...
I really enjoyed the snappy, quippy writing style used through most of the story though, and using veganism for super wood style powers was really funny & clever!
I think your idea was really cool, but if I were to try it I probably would have made Ino Naruto’s ex, Sakura the sister, Sasuke the gay roommate (lol), Tenten the drummer for Naruto’s band who he dated & discarded, hmm... but then who would be Aubrey Plaza..? Yeah, it’s kind of awkward but there seem to be less mainish female Naruto characters than there were in SP... maybe it would have been fun if the Akatsuki were the deadly exes with Pein as The Final Ex or something... errr... yeah... you did well with what you gad in any case :)
5SocialSuicideGirlHmmmmm that was a neat story, and I love SPVtW, but I do have to wonder about some of the adjustments you made, like why was the band thing a part of the story when it didn’t really factor in past the 1st battle of the bands thing, why didn’t you have a fun face-off against Shino like they have with Captain America in the movie? Why was Sasuke the final ex? Doesn’t the Byakugan cancel out the Sharingan or something?
...the story started out really great but then as it glossed over/departed from certain plot points from the movie I wondered if there was a good reason & it was building to something else, but yeah...
I really enjoyed the snappy, quippy writing style used through most of the story though, and using veganism for super wood style powers was really funny & clever!
I think your idea was really cool, but if I were to try it I probably would have made Ino Naruto’s ex, Sakura the sister, Sasuke the gay roommate (lol), Tenten the drummer for Naruto’s band who he dated & discarded, hmm... but then who would be Aubrey Plaza..? Yeah, it’s kind of awkward but there seem to be less mainish female Naruto characters than there were in SP... maybe it would have been fun if the Akatsuki were the deadly exes with Pein as The Final Ex or something... errr... yeah... you did well with what you gad in any case :)
2/27/2018 c7 9NarHina
It was alright, I never read this for action and more for the comedy any why, Shino being beaten by you because he never got a fight was a nice touch.
Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
9NarHinaIt was alright, I never read this for action and more for the comedy any why, Shino being beaten by you because he never got a fight was a nice touch.
Naruto and Hinata Forever:)
6/4/2014 c6 procon
Lol I love how witty and clever and just over all hilarious everyone and their personalities are! I really like this story as I really liked the movie! I know you probably won't update this story but I felt I should praise good work when I read it! Ja ne!
Lol I love how witty and clever and just over all hilarious everyone and their personalities are! I really like this story as I really liked the movie! I know you probably won't update this story but I felt I should praise good work when I read it! Ja ne!
4/8/2014 c6 1RisingMist
I for one second that. There really needs to be a chapter 7. There's too much insane goodness in here to miss out on seeing the end of the story! Ed's cameo, gossip jutsu, Kankuro, flying Jiraiya, this chapter had it all! The only reference I missed was the magazine cover of the guy Kankuro had gone to stalk. Was it Shino? I'm rather confused.
Thanks for an ace chapter guys!
1RisingMistI for one second that. There really needs to be a chapter 7. There's too much insane goodness in here to miss out on seeing the end of the story! Ed's cameo, gossip jutsu, Kankuro, flying Jiraiya, this chapter had it all! The only reference I missed was the magazine cover of the guy Kankuro had gone to stalk. Was it Shino? I'm rather confused.
Thanks for an ace chapter guys!
3/7/2014 c6 joe
good story I cant cant wait for the next chapter though I wonder how hinata could do the fourths jutsu
good story I cant cant wait for the next chapter though I wonder how hinata could do the fourths jutsu
8/30/2013 c6 5Money Funk
that was funny, awesome, weird and romantic but more random and unexpected in more ways than one
5Money Funkthat was funny, awesome, weird and romantic but more random and unexpected in more ways than one
9/19/2012 c1 19bigdogneversleeps
I love the concept, and Solvdrage is cowriting, so that makes this story epic level, but it just doesn't fit. A NaruSaku, in all honesty, works better for the crossover than NaruHina. Can you really see Sakura as Knives Chao? No, you don't. You see Hinata, sweet cute Hinata. Sakura more closely aligns with Ramona. And the evil ex's ( I'm not reading but these are my guesses) of Omoi, Kiba, Lee (epic vegan? Come on!), Tenten, Gaara and his identical twin, Shukaku, and Sasuke. No doubt this is good, but I can't get behind the intial concept.
19bigdogneversleepsI love the concept, and Solvdrage is cowriting, so that makes this story epic level, but it just doesn't fit. A NaruSaku, in all honesty, works better for the crossover than NaruHina. Can you really see Sakura as Knives Chao? No, you don't. You see Hinata, sweet cute Hinata. Sakura more closely aligns with Ramona. And the evil ex's ( I'm not reading but these are my guesses) of Omoi, Kiba, Lee (epic vegan? Come on!), Tenten, Gaara and his identical twin, Shukaku, and Sasuke. No doubt this is good, but I can't get behind the intial concept.