for Useless Parts4/14/2018 c1 
136Devin Trinidad
Great job! I loved the characterization of the character—most notably, Wheatley’s. This was a great story with an idea that really set itself up for that well delivered last few paragraphs. It was cute, wonderful, and it could have happened in canon. :)
Great job and have a wonderful day!
136Devin TrinidadGreat job! I loved the characterization of the character—most notably, Wheatley’s. This was a great story with an idea that really set itself up for that well delivered last few paragraphs. It was cute, wonderful, and it could have happened in canon. :)
Great job and have a wonderful day!
12/29/2017 c1 14faroutfangirl
THIS WAS ADORABLE. I am LIVING for Wheatley wanting more kisses. oh my gosh, i'm just-i'm just *cries* thank you for this wonderful fanfic
14faroutfangirlTHIS WAS ADORABLE. I am LIVING for Wheatley wanting more kisses. oh my gosh, i'm just-i'm just *cries* thank you for this wonderful fanfic
9/8/2016 c1 4totallyobsessedwithSVTFOE
If this was canon I would imagine the following to happen at the end-
"I would tell her I'm really, truly sorry. It's a shame really. I never got that kiss..."
...
"SPPPPAAAAAACCCCEEE"
XD I'm dying of laughter here
4totallyobsessedwithSVTFOEIf this was canon I would imagine the following to happen at the end-
"I would tell her I'm really, truly sorry. It's a shame really. I never got that kiss..."
...
"SPPPPAAAAAACCCCEEE"
XD I'm dying of laughter here
4/17/2016 c1 9g14classify
Amazing. So very cute. Never thought I'd ship those two, but thanks to you darn you xD
9g14classifyAmazing. So very cute. Never thought I'd ship those two, but thanks to you darn you xD
4/15/2016 c1 4SilverWolfPup
Oh, sweetheart! Lovely, lovely, lovely! That's Wheatley all over (at least at the start), all awkward and adorable and I just want to give him a hug... or a kiss I suppose. So sweet...
I do admit to some curiosity as to what Chell was thinking. Was that just because he's adorable and to make a point? Because she's fully able to not-listen to GLaDOS, why can't she not-listen to Wheatley accidentally insulting her? But then again, it's nice-Wheatley who doesn't want to kill us! Who doesn't love nice-Wheatley...
4SilverWolfPupOh, sweetheart! Lovely, lovely, lovely! That's Wheatley all over (at least at the start), all awkward and adorable and I just want to give him a hug... or a kiss I suppose. So sweet...
I do admit to some curiosity as to what Chell was thinking. Was that just because he's adorable and to make a point? Because she's fully able to not-listen to GLaDOS, why can't she not-listen to Wheatley accidentally insulting her? But then again, it's nice-Wheatley who doesn't want to kill us! Who doesn't love nice-Wheatley...
8/21/2015 c1 2Gonturan0
That was funny and really cute. Wheatley's speech and character are perfect, and Chell's personality is fitting too.
2Gonturan0That was funny and really cute. Wheatley's speech and character are perfect, and Chell's personality is fitting too.
9/28/2014 c1 reyah
thats all? thats just sad..
thats all? thats just sad..
1/14/2014 c1 Guest
Love this! Wheatley's is so adorable in this! And, he was written very well into character! This story is just so cute, I just want to eat it up! Though it is pretty sad that Wheatley won't get that second kiss though... But on a brighter note, this is a wonderful, sweet and well written story!
Love this! Wheatley's is so adorable in this! And, he was written very well into character! This story is just so cute, I just want to eat it up! Though it is pretty sad that Wheatley won't get that second kiss though... But on a brighter note, this is a wonderful, sweet and well written story!