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5/31/2013 c1 20theway.youare13
Ooooh It's a good beginning and I totally loved this story... I hope you'll soon uptdate... I can't wait to see what will happen to the little girl...
7/17/2012 c3 MaryJaneBomer
Cool story
7/31/2011 c3 15EvaH2Os
ooh, Thirteen and/or Cameron with kid stories are my favorite! Also, I definitely thought she was halucinating the girl. Loving it!
7/5/2011 c3 11xRedwingedx
What a great start to this story! One rarely encounters stories written in the second person, and for good reason: it's very hard to write in the second person and make it work. I speak from experience. Which is why I'm so impressed with the way you pull it off so well! Also if you hadn't stated that English is not your first language I never would have guessed it. Everything seems very true to the characters thus far. I (rather impatiently) await more.
7/4/2011 c3 1Beatlemania3
Continue por favor!
6/10/2011 c2 7RememberStars
For someone who's first language isn't English, you do write in a beautiful way. I've enjoyed it immensely so far
6/5/2011 c2 laylarei
well it's good... i wonder if the girl is real?
5/29/2011 c1 15EvaH2Os
this was amazing, especially considering english isn't your first language. i hope you continue. i want Thirteen to be okay.
5/27/2011 c1 laylarei
good story, good start...

keep it up..

I'll wait for the next chapters..
5/27/2011 c1 32Epsarrow
I can't wait to see more of this.

Nice job!

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