for First Love9/28/2012 c1 
3jasper.oh.hale.yes
i would like to read this story, but it is too difficult to follow with the paragraphs like this. you should separate them more, if you do, then i will read it, and im sure a lot of other people would too. most people turn around right away when they open a story that is formatted like this.
3jasper.oh.hale.yesi would like to read this story, but it is too difficult to follow with the paragraphs like this. you should separate them more, if you do, then i will read it, and im sure a lot of other people would too. most people turn around right away when they open a story that is formatted like this.
11/20/2011 c1 2spoby4eva
U read/reviewed my story soo hi! Super awesomme! love the end :)
LOVE, RHIANNON
2spoby4evaU read/reviewed my story soo hi! Super awesomme! love the end :)
LOVE, RHIANNON
11/20/2011 c1 spoby4eva
U read/reviewed my story soo hi! Super awesomme! love the end :)
LOVE, RHIANNON
U read/reviewed my story soo hi! Super awesomme! love the end :)
LOVE, RHIANNON
5/27/2011 c1 Minny Mouse
I thought your story was a really good start. It would help to break up the paragraphs more so that it is easier to read.
I thought your story was a really good start. It would help to break up the paragraphs more so that it is easier to read.