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9/28/2012 c1 3jasper.oh.hale.yes
i would like to read this story, but it is too difficult to follow with the paragraphs like this. you should separate them more, if you do, then i will read it, and im sure a lot of other people would too. most people turn around right away when they open a story that is formatted like this.
11/20/2011 c1 2spoby4eva
U read/reviewed my story soo hi! Super awesomme! love the end :)

LOVE, RHIANNON
11/20/2011 c1 spoby4eva
U read/reviewed my story soo hi! Super awesomme! love the end :)

LOVE, RHIANNON
5/29/2011 c1 4Lillian81
Wow, I love this story. If you continue it, I'd love to beta it for you!
5/27/2011 c1 Minny Mouse
I thought your story was a really good start. It would help to break up the paragraphs more so that it is easier to read.

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