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for Touhou RPG: Mystery of the Great Rampage

5/6/2012 c2 11Nicolas Crossworth
well now, nothing wrong with the sentence construction and in the grammatical areas. Both of these were expertly done, I admit.

The only thing that... left me speechless was the, um, game like battle sequences. Yes it said RPG, but I was not expecting THAT.

Anyway, it was entertaining to read.

Reading in an RPG aspect felt awkward for me, but hey, that's only me, don't know about the others, though.

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