for This is No Longer a Game9/11/2011 c1 Bobby
Hmmmmmmmm...seems interesting. This 1st chapter seemed kinda introductory, but then again, its supposed to! I'm looking 4ward 2 the next chapter! And yes, I am who you think I am. Evil directed me.
The all powerful Bobby
Hmmmmmmmm...seems interesting. This 1st chapter seemed kinda introductory, but then again, its supposed to! I'm looking 4ward 2 the next chapter! And yes, I am who you think I am. Evil directed me.
The all powerful Bobby
6/7/2011 c1 L'xx
Ok. This is so good that i'm going to have to write 'amazing' pronouncing every syllable like i'm saying it. I know, I know. It's very cliched, but this is one of those few times were it's actually needed: A-MA-ZING!
I knew it was going to be good because the girl is called 'Lily'. which is the best name ever (no, it's my cats name, not mine. Although "L'xx" Does suggest Lily.) also you spelt it with only one 'L'! That's how I spell it!
Anyway, I like the ending and how... mysterious it is...
You can practically hear the 'Eastenders' music! (If you don't watch British soap operas that wont make sense)
Ok. This is so good that i'm going to have to write 'amazing' pronouncing every syllable like i'm saying it. I know, I know. It's very cliched, but this is one of those few times were it's actually needed: A-MA-ZING!
I knew it was going to be good because the girl is called 'Lily'. which is the best name ever (no, it's my cats name, not mine. Although "L'xx" Does suggest Lily.) also you spelt it with only one 'L'! That's how I spell it!
Anyway, I like the ending and how... mysterious it is...
You can practically hear the 'Eastenders' music! (If you don't watch British soap operas that wont make sense)
5/31/2011 c1 Voldymort Jr
HOWDY!
I loved your fanfic! So many great descriptions and settings! It's only the first chapter and I can already feel the tension building! Eeep! Please update more soon!
~Voldymort Jr.
HOWDY!
I loved your fanfic! So many great descriptions and settings! It's only the first chapter and I can already feel the tension building! Eeep! Please update more soon!
~Voldymort Jr.
5/30/2011 c1 
1almostgone71
Fantastic. Utterly (moo) fantastic.
Excellent writing. =D I absolutely loved the beginning. ...and the middle. ...as well as the end.
This chapter flowed really nicely. I'm so excited to see where this goes. yay!
And really good grammar. It's annoying reading a chapter where there are constant grammatical errors. U must have a really good beta... =D
Great chapter! Cant wait for more!
1almostgone71Fantastic. Utterly (moo) fantastic.
Excellent writing. =D I absolutely loved the beginning. ...and the middle. ...as well as the end.
This chapter flowed really nicely. I'm so excited to see where this goes. yay!
And really good grammar. It's annoying reading a chapter where there are constant grammatical errors. U must have a really good beta... =D
Great chapter! Cant wait for more!