for Omoi's Secret6/2 c12 Crimson Hawk Wolf
I like how things have gone in this story and the idea you have had for it but I do wish you would of had something on how everyone met and how they all came together like they have. Way to many questions on when and how they met here and makes it a bit confusing even if everything seems and feels like it works great.
Other then that I’m loving the idea you had for this story and I’m looking forward to reading more chapters when it gets posted.
I like how things have gone in this story and the idea you have had for it but I do wish you would of had something on how everyone met and how they all came together like they have. Way to many questions on when and how they met here and makes it a bit confusing even if everything seems and feels like it works great.
Other then that I’m loving the idea you had for this story and I’m looking forward to reading more chapters when it gets posted.
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