
1/30/2024 c12 JP
There is just something ethereal on how you end the scene with Lucius. The wet eyes and desperation on his face is juicy! Decadent enough to forgive his schoolboy antics to soothe his self-inflicted punishment with a kiss. Gah! I aspire to write with such vividness. You made both Hook and Lucius compelling in their unique ways. But, I’m so partial to teary, sickeningly pining Lucius prepared to throw himself at Hermione’s altar. Serious swooning is being had!
There is just something ethereal on how you end the scene with Lucius. The wet eyes and desperation on his face is juicy! Decadent enough to forgive his schoolboy antics to soothe his self-inflicted punishment with a kiss. Gah! I aspire to write with such vividness. You made both Hook and Lucius compelling in their unique ways. But, I’m so partial to teary, sickeningly pining Lucius prepared to throw himself at Hermione’s altar. Serious swooning is being had!
1/2/2024 c3 Mopsmama
I was sooooo sceptical about this FF. But now I recognise Hook as the counterpart to Lucius I never knew I needed! I adore the question about Lucius' title! Thank you for writing this! I'm enjoying every single word!
I was sooooo sceptical about this FF. But now I recognise Hook as the counterpart to Lucius I never knew I needed! I adore the question about Lucius' title! Thank you for writing this! I'm enjoying every single word!
4/19/2023 c15 cathn
I really wasn't that keen to read a crossover but I'm making my way through all of the stories and didn't want to miss it out. I soooooo enjoyed this. It wasn't what I expected. It was so much more. Thanks so much for sharing.
I really wasn't that keen to read a crossover but I'm making my way through all of the stories and didn't want to miss it out. I soooooo enjoyed this. It wasn't what I expected. It was so much more. Thanks so much for sharing.
4/21/2022 c15
4YouCanCallMeHarley
What a delightful story ugh I would love if you would write a lil sequel in which Hermione and Lucius somehow end up on hooks ship and have to figure their way back this was so good tho

What a delightful story ugh I would love if you would write a lil sequel in which Hermione and Lucius somehow end up on hooks ship and have to figure their way back this was so good tho
2/19/2022 c15 ananchanon
I really cried, it was so much fun.I think James and Hermione love each other. but they don't say But in the end they had to come to the truth. The last remaining were Hermione and Lucius.
I really cried, it was so much fun.I think James and Hermione love each other. but they don't say But in the end they had to come to the truth. The last remaining were Hermione and Lucius.
2/18/2022 c15 FlyFreeForever
I balled at the end! I loved this story so much! So very well written with all characters!
I balled at the end! I loved this story so much! So very well written with all characters!
7/22/2021 c15 pointed.exclamation
I enjoyed this more than I thought I would. I never so crossovers but I'm glad I gave this a shot. Thanks for this gift LL!
I enjoyed this more than I thought I would. I never so crossovers but I'm glad I gave this a shot. Thanks for this gift LL!
4/4/2021 c15
13Auktober
This was a remarkably beautiful story. I was taken on a magical and emotional adventure. Your characterization was amazing and your use of description was very lovely. The dialogue between the characters were humorous, clever, and emotion provoking. There are so many wonderful elements to this story. I am so happy that I found this story. Thank you for such a beautiful tale.
~Auktober

This was a remarkably beautiful story. I was taken on a magical and emotional adventure. Your characterization was amazing and your use of description was very lovely. The dialogue between the characters were humorous, clever, and emotion provoking. There are so many wonderful elements to this story. I am so happy that I found this story. Thank you for such a beautiful tale.
~Auktober