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6/27/2020 c8 Goldenbassets
Oooh game on, is it? Hook baiting Malfoy had me squealing!

Hook is indeed naughty and I love it! The naughtier the better I say
6/27/2020 c7 Goldenbassets
Damn. That was amazing. Wow. I’m going to need a shower to cool off now. Incredibly great way to get Hermione to relax and forget the bad evening;)
6/27/2020 c6 Goldenbassets
Fantastic argument with Lucius and Hermione! All that UST just flying around! Phew! The air is positively lobbing big balls of UST everywhere! And Hook dueling with the dummy sounds stunningly hottt! So disappointed Pascoe interrupted them. Very suspicious timing I’d say...

Having so much fun with this fic! Thank you!
6/26/2020 c5 Goldenbassets
Thoroughly enjoying this fic!
6/26/2020 c4 Goldenbassets
Ha! I loved every bit of that back and forth between Hook and Malfoy! Hook is a force and I love him already. Wow. Very good.
6/26/2020 c3 Goldenbassets
Oh the meeting of Malfoy and Hook was quite fun! I can picture the two extremes; long straight platinum blonde and long dark black curls. One stalking around the other with narrowed eyes until respect, admiration on both sides and shared brandy.
6/26/2020 c2 Goldenbassets
Oh it is so good! I love this version of adult Hermione. She's changed, grown yet still feels very Hermione.

Cannot wait to see what happens now that Capt. James Hook is here!

Btw, I looked up screenshots of James Isaacs as Hook and OMG is he devilishly delectable or what?! That version of Peter Pan will be watched ASAP.
6/26/2020 c1 Goldenbassets
I've never been drawn into a crossover but here I am, being sucked in! I'm enjoying it immensely. Good pacing and characterization. Looking forward to meeting the captain!
6/4/2020 c15 12MarcellaDix
Parting is such sweet sorrow. That scene with the fox and the girl was inspired. Thank you for this beautiful story. You've spun a magnificent tale and your glorious writing skills have breathed life into these characters. Amazing work!
6/4/2020 c14 MarcellaDix
Oh wow. Wow wow wow. Wowee. That was... hot. HOT. And yet, you captured their emotions perfectly. Thank you!
6/4/2020 c13 MarcellaDix
Finally! Another magnificent chapter. Thank you so much!
6/4/2020 c12 MarcellaDix
Aaawww, what a wild ride! From the duel to the confrontation and then such a heart baring, and finally a kiss! Yay!
6/4/2020 c11 MarcellaDix
Such an emotional chapter! What a whirlwind.
6/4/2020 c10 MarcellaDix
Oooh, that moment in the kitchen was so sweet. I was a bit confused, though, that Hermionewho hadn't even masturbated in several months, much less had adventurous escapadeswould have taken lube with her to Malfoy manor. But hey, I guess she's prepared for anything and everything to happen at all times.
6/3/2020 c9 MarcellaDix
So many irresistible men... I love how Hook does his best to rile up Lucius, and it seems that he is succeeding to an extent. Fantastic writing!
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