for Man Unfathomable6/3/2020 c8 
12MarcellaDix
Another marvelously delicious chapter! And then Lucius is back and we're back in this curious triangle. What a glorious mess!
12MarcellaDixAnother marvelously delicious chapter! And then Lucius is back and we're back in this curious triangle. What a glorious mess!
6/3/2020 c6 MarcellaDix
Yes, still love me a furious Hermione. You are writing all their interactions and motivations so very brilliantly!
Yes, still love me a furious Hermione. You are writing all their interactions and motivations so very brilliantly!
6/3/2020 c5 MarcellaDix
Hook makes for some very engaging dialogues. And I love a furious Hermione. You've painted both of them so well. Great work, thank you!
Hook makes for some very engaging dialogues. And I love a furious Hermione. You've painted both of them so well. Great work, thank you!
6/3/2020 c4 MarcellaDix
Not very gentleman-like to haggle over who gets to bed her, but here we are. Good for Hermione to have two brilliant men fighting over her, even if Lucius needs to be pushed into his good luck.
Not very gentleman-like to haggle over who gets to bed her, but here we are. Good for Hermione to have two brilliant men fighting over her, even if Lucius needs to be pushed into his good luck.
6/3/2020 c3 MarcellaDix
The men's appraisal of each other was brilliantly done, and you've captured everyone's shock and struggle to adapt to the situation at hand very well. Kudos!
The men's appraisal of each other was brilliantly done, and you've captured everyone's shock and struggle to adapt to the situation at hand very well. Kudos!
6/3/2020 c2 MarcellaDix
Oh my. This is bound to be interesting. I'm curious to see which ones of Hermione's more advanced kinks the captain might provide relief for. Another great chapter, thank you!
Oh my. This is bound to be interesting. I'm curious to see which ones of Hermione's more advanced kinks the captain might provide relief for. Another great chapter, thank you!
6/2/2020 c1 MarcellaDix
I went ridiculously giddy at "and now, after a glance, he would catch her eye and not lower his head". How frustrating that Lucius panicked at the thought of happiness and human touch. Great chapter, thank you!
I went ridiculously giddy at "and now, after a glance, he would catch her eye and not lower his head". How frustrating that Lucius panicked at the thought of happiness and human touch. Great chapter, thank you!
2/13/2020 c15 Talonwillow
omgoodness! this is the 2nd time I've read this , but 1st time all the way through, not sure why I didn't finish it the first time...this was AMAZING! You captured 2 characters splendidly! Although they are played by the same actor in their respective films, you made them feel so separate, so unique not once did I feel confused as too who was who. When watching a film you would credit the acting but I feel in writing that would be even more difficult and you NAILED IT !
omgoodness! this is the 2nd time I've read this , but 1st time all the way through, not sure why I didn't finish it the first time...this was AMAZING! You captured 2 characters splendidly! Although they are played by the same actor in their respective films, you made them feel so separate, so unique not once did I feel confused as too who was who. When watching a film you would credit the acting but I feel in writing that would be even more difficult and you NAILED IT !
2/11/2020 c14 PurpleIsis
I freely admit to never having read a cross over before but could not resist the thought of 2 Jason isaacs ;-)
I actually loved the storyline and how you wove the 2 worlds together. I love your stuff anyway but this was glorious! I do love a man with danger behind his eyes and this had both my faves!
I freely admit to never having read a cross over before but could not resist the thought of 2 Jason isaacs ;-)
I actually loved the storyline and how you wove the 2 worlds together. I love your stuff anyway but this was glorious! I do love a man with danger behind his eyes and this had both my faves!
10/6/2019 c3 4DeathDagger
I find I am tickled by the idea of this man talking to another facet of himself
4DeathDaggerI find I am tickled by the idea of this man talking to another facet of himself
10/6/2019 c3 DeathDagger
I find I am tickled by the idea of this man talking to another facet of himself
I find I am tickled by the idea of this man talking to another facet of himself