for It's Elemental, My Dear Merlin9/21/2017 c1 Panthera Azure
If you -or anyone else for that matter- do this story PLEASE let me know!
If you -or anyone else for that matter- do this story PLEASE let me know!
8/26/2017 c1 Guest
This is genius!
This is genius!
1/1/2017 c1 PotterWhoLockLover
So, im guessingyou aren't going to continue with this story, but i still want to say that this is a really intresting idea, and that I'll be glad if you would consider writing the rest
So, im guessingyou aren't going to continue with this story, but i still want to say that this is a really intresting idea, and that I'll be glad if you would consider writing the rest
10/25/2016 c1 
2Indigene Syke
I found this, and I'm sure it's an old idea, but it could be really interesting. You should continue it.
2Indigene SykeI found this, and I'm sure it's an old idea, but it could be really interesting. You should continue it.
9/28/2016 c1 2TidePoolDevil
This sounds really, very interesting and very cool. If it is expanded upon one day...I will be a very happy little munchkin. :)
2TidePoolDevilThis sounds really, very interesting and very cool. If it is expanded upon one day...I will be a very happy little munchkin. :)
8/24/2015 c1 Aithusa Vase
OH MY GOD PLEASE MAKE THIS INTO A MULTICHAPTER LIKE 200K FIC. IT WOULD BE AMAZING.
WHEN DID YOU DO THIS
*scrolls up*
2011. FUCK.
DO IT! it would be so so good. so so clever. ahh.
OH MY GOD PLEASE MAKE THIS INTO A MULTICHAPTER LIKE 200K FIC. IT WOULD BE AMAZING.
WHEN DID YOU DO THIS
*scrolls up*
2011. FUCK.
DO IT! it would be so so good. so so clever. ahh.
1/21/2015 c1 DragonThetan
A real story out of all that would have been nice! The build-up was great but the lack of any kind of story attached to it makes me wonder why did you even bother to post this?
A real story out of all that would have been nice! The build-up was great but the lack of any kind of story attached to it makes me wonder why did you even bother to post this?
6/29/2014 c1 Guest
You should really continue this. It's a good idea :)
You should really continue this. It's a good idea :)
2/11/2014 c1 Guest
Ooooh, that's really clever! Please keep working with it if you get the chance :)
Ooooh, that's really clever! Please keep working with it if you get the chance :)
10/31/2013 c1 Guest
You should write this. I like your writing style, and it's and awesome idea.
You should write this. I like your writing style, and it's and awesome idea.
10/3/2013 c1 13I am the HERO AMERICA
I really hope you continue this. You have an amazing idea for a story and I would love to see how it ends. If you ever need and idea, I'm full of them. I really hope you continue with this amazing plot line. I'd love to read it!
13I am the HERO AMERICAI really hope you continue this. You have an amazing idea for a story and I would love to see how it ends. If you ever need and idea, I'm full of them. I really hope you continue with this amazing plot line. I'd love to read it!