6/8/2011 c1 1CandyGalaxy
Wonderfully written! It was well paced and you kept the characters in-character. 3
I love this story, well done! :D x
Wonderfully written! It was well paced and you kept the characters in-character. 3
I love this story, well done! :D x
6/3/2011 c1 Melody
This was very sweet. :D Also, the majority of it used correct grammar which makes me happy. :)
There were a few mistakes I noticed, but they were most likely just typos. At the end it said Soda heared when it should of been Soda heard. Also, it said Ponys when it should have been Pony's.
Like I said, those were probably just typos and this was written very well.
This was very sweet. :D Also, the majority of it used correct grammar which makes me happy. :)
There were a few mistakes I noticed, but they were most likely just typos. At the end it said Soda heared when it should of been Soda heard. Also, it said Ponys when it should have been Pony's.
Like I said, those were probably just typos and this was written very well.
6/2/2011 c1 Imgonnabelateforschool
This is great, I never see stories like this with Pony's perspective on Soda and Sandy's relationship. I think you should definitely do another chapter or two. It would make me very happy :D
This is great, I never see stories like this with Pony's perspective on Soda and Sandy's relationship. I think you should definitely do another chapter or two. It would make me very happy :D
6/1/2011 c1 10JohnnyIsMyGoldSunset
Awww, cute and fluffy! Hehe, Dally makes me laugh. Just randomly sitting there! Awww, Pone and Soda are so cute! Whoa, Sandy what chu been doin' to Soda's neck? She's stupid and awkward. I hate her. Anyway, very cute!
Awww, cute and fluffy! Hehe, Dally makes me laugh. Just randomly sitting there! Awww, Pone and Soda are so cute! Whoa, Sandy what chu been doin' to Soda's neck? She's stupid and awkward. I hate her. Anyway, very cute!
6/1/2011 c1 10Believe In Something Bigger
I really like this! I feel so bad for Ponyboy, haha. I really hope you continue this even though it's probably only supposed to be a one-shot.
I really like this! I feel so bad for Ponyboy, haha. I really hope you continue this even though it's probably only supposed to be a one-shot.
6/1/2011 c1 Out of Operation
You know, this was really adorable. I think you should deifnitely consider making this a two or three shot, maybe going into Pony's feelings towards Soda going out with Sandy all the time. It's obvious that he was kind of upset about it at the end there, but I think that you should for sure think about that. I would love to read more.
You did a great job capturing Pony and Soda's brotherly love. Their relationship is my absolute favorite and I love it when people can actually capture it correctly. Great, great job.
Other than a couple minor spelling errors, nothing negative to report(: Please think about continuing this!
You know, this was really adorable. I think you should deifnitely consider making this a two or three shot, maybe going into Pony's feelings towards Soda going out with Sandy all the time. It's obvious that he was kind of upset about it at the end there, but I think that you should for sure think about that. I would love to read more.
You did a great job capturing Pony and Soda's brotherly love. Their relationship is my absolute favorite and I love it when people can actually capture it correctly. Great, great job.
Other than a couple minor spelling errors, nothing negative to report(: Please think about continuing this!