
6/10/2011 c1
57Amulet Misty
Interesting start to a story, I'm looking forward to the second chapter :D
You should get those grammar mistakes fixed though, as well as capitalising your title and improving your summary.

Interesting start to a story, I'm looking forward to the second chapter :D
You should get those grammar mistakes fixed though, as well as capitalising your title and improving your summary.