for Tamed9/19/2013 c1 
5YuiKudo
Sweet and hilarious! I like the way you wrote it and generally everything else too!
5YuiKudoSweet and hilarious! I like the way you wrote it and generally everything else too!
5/5/2013 c1 13ToscaThorCat
I wish the Okumuracest will stop... I mean, Rin is obviously into girls... and Yukio... well... I think he's too in love with his job to have time for a girl or a guy XD so thank you for the RinxShiemi fic!
13ToscaThorCatI wish the Okumuracest will stop... I mean, Rin is obviously into girls... and Yukio... well... I think he's too in love with his job to have time for a girl or a guy XD so thank you for the RinxShiemi fic!
10/21/2012 c1 Moon's Smile
This is wonderful. I love it. It says so much in such little words. It's just great.
I agree, there should be more Rin/Shiemi fics. They're so adorable. :3
Awesome job! :)
This is wonderful. I love it. It says so much in such little words. It's just great.
I agree, there should be more Rin/Shiemi fics. They're so adorable. :3
Awesome job! :)
6/27/2012 c1 7liplocks
awww this was cute. i like you acknowledge that they both changed upon meeting each other and how ( despite their outer facades ) they have both strong and weak points :3
7liplocksawww this was cute. i like you acknowledge that they both changed upon meeting each other and how ( despite their outer facades ) they have both strong and weak points :3
7/13/2011 c1 3Missy'Cinnamon
I do hope so.. (The contribution thing, i mean...) I really love this... simple and sweet. :))) Hope you make more...
3Missy'CinnamonI do hope so.. (The contribution thing, i mean...) I really love this... simple and sweet. :))) Hope you make more...
6/29/2011 c1 16Ori
Oh Shiemi is so cute and Rin is so oblivious. How can that be? I think I may contribute to this fandom too one of these days cause they are so awesome.
16OriOh Shiemi is so cute and Rin is so oblivious. How can that be? I think I may contribute to this fandom too one of these days cause they are so awesome.
6/18/2011 c1 3raisinbrandy
With even so few words, I could feel the power behind them. This was extremely well written. Your diction and word choice was phenomenal.
And the last line? /Woah./
The only thing that really bothers me is that this sounds like a description more than an actual story. A prologue maybe? I could certainly see this turning into a full chaptered fic.
Perhaps consider it? You definitely have the talent.
3raisinbrandyWith even so few words, I could feel the power behind them. This was extremely well written. Your diction and word choice was phenomenal.
And the last line? /Woah./
The only thing that really bothers me is that this sounds like a description more than an actual story. A prologue maybe? I could certainly see this turning into a full chaptered fic.
Perhaps consider it? You definitely have the talent.
6/15/2011 c1 33Rinhail
Aww, so sweet! ♥
And yes, there is a severe lack of RinShiemi fics. I should upload my own. C:
33RinhailAww, so sweet! ♥
And yes, there is a severe lack of RinShiemi fics. I should upload my own. C:
6/10/2011 c1 Abigail
Great story! More ShiemixRin goodness please. ^_^
Great story! More ShiemixRin goodness please. ^_^