
6/3/2011 c1
14SnowKiter
Ah...
I apologize, but I really, really had trouble reading and comprehending that...
(Is English your first language?)
Well, Steven being a criminal is a...interesting and creative concept! ^.^;;
You really, really need to work on your mechanics though. Perhaps you should type with spell check?
Also...I'm not sure I understand the title of this...story...
Yeah, I think that's all I'm able to say...have a nice day and keep writing~! ^.^

Ah...
I apologize, but I really, really had trouble reading and comprehending that...
(Is English your first language?)
Well, Steven being a criminal is a...interesting and creative concept! ^.^;;
You really, really need to work on your mechanics though. Perhaps you should type with spell check?
Also...I'm not sure I understand the title of this...story...
Yeah, I think that's all I'm able to say...have a nice day and keep writing~! ^.^