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12/15/2011 c1 11Tavingtonlover123
LIKE OMG THIS WAS ABSOULTY FUNNY I LAUGHED MY BUTT OFF AND WELL FELL BACKWARDS OFF MY CHAIR AND WAS STILL LAUGHING
7/26/2011 c1 2S t a r s in the Night S k y
What. The. Fuck.

This, my friend, is pure genius. Absolutely... wow.

Except for a few spelling mistakes. Grammar Nazi time!

I noticed how it went from past-tense to present tense (ex. Hermione takes out the taser. Trip grabbed the baseball bat. Susan shouted "Shut up!" and grabs the taser and baseball bat. Not sure if these are the actual thing, but I needed to get my point across.)

Besides that, genius.

You are a sick, twisted person. Okay, one last thing, I loved the William Wallace fangirl. Hysterical.

-Louisa

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