6/7/2011 c2 6Joanne Brandon
Great chapter and I'm glad that Al is alright despite the painful knee, poor baby. I liked the whole do you think an ocean will stop Scott that was funny. Update soon please because I'm interested to see where you are heading with the this and got excited when my email told me that you had updated 5 chapters then got upset when you hadn't!
Great chapter and I'm glad that Al is alright despite the painful knee, poor baby. I liked the whole do you think an ocean will stop Scott that was funny. Update soon please because I'm interested to see where you are heading with the this and got excited when my email told me that you had updated 5 chapters then got upset when you hadn't!
6/6/2011 c1 5tukatarina
Aww it's kind of cute. I like how Alan is shy about those kinds of things, so basically I've liked how you've started this off.
I can't wait to read more! I'm always up for a good Alan whump.
Aww it's kind of cute. I like how Alan is shy about those kinds of things, so basically I've liked how you've started this off.
I can't wait to read more! I'm always up for a good Alan whump.
6/6/2011 c1 cmiddleton
Really engaging start, very well written. interested to see where this story goes :)
Really engaging start, very well written. interested to see where this story goes :)
6/6/2011 c1 littlejoe1411
Definitely continue writing this story! I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter! :)
Definitely continue writing this story! I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter! :)
6/6/2011 c1 NotanAccountAnymore
I say continue it, please. I really want to know what happened and where he's getting stitches, I'm intrigued. I hope you decide to continue it. Thanks :)
I say continue it, please. I really want to know what happened and where he's getting stitches, I'm intrigued. I hope you decide to continue it. Thanks :)
6/6/2011 c1 6Joanne Brandon
Well to start off you should definitely continue this story as I want to know what happened and my brain has gone into over drive as to where he is getting stitches. Also I liked the way the hormones kicked in that was a nice touch. I can't wait to hear more from this story so update and betterify soon please!
Well to start off you should definitely continue this story as I want to know what happened and my brain has gone into over drive as to where he is getting stitches. Also I liked the way the hormones kicked in that was a nice touch. I can't wait to hear more from this story so update and betterify soon please!