for Return of the Uzumakis Redone11/29/2020 c8 
1Chaosh.H.A.O.S
I will say that in order to make a good Rahman lemon fake is to use the fedy and feeder type of a logic and then bind it together with a little for play and then you can add in some of the citrus to make your own little bit better but then also add in a little bit of nipping and biting in certain places with certain pieces of food and then it could turn into a good and lemon
1Chaosh.H.A.O.SI will say that in order to make a good Rahman lemon fake is to use the fedy and feeder type of a logic and then bind it together with a little for play and then you can add in some of the citrus to make your own little bit better but then also add in a little bit of nipping and biting in certain places with certain pieces of food and then it could turn into a good and lemon
10/1/2020 c16 valash122
yep didn't even read cause reason being is your reviewer decided it for me, reason being is this a redemption fic so ill just say this there is no redemption for them at all you don't abandon your child for any reason what so ever so there is no excuse for it, if you believe he should forgive them especially KUSHINA then your naïve and have never had it happen to you, you believe in the concept that those who have been abandon for simple reasons should just forgive the parent/parents who abandon you especially in naruto's case so in the end no he should never forgive her and she should just go about her business because she failed as an UZUMAKI who are know to put FAMILY ABOVE ANY AND ALL THINGS NO MATTER WHAT so to abandon him cause of fear. This is why i hate read abandon/neglect fictions because every author has this belief that naruto should forgive his parents, which i believe is ridiculous to begin with, plus i hate how people portray kushina as a bad parent and what not im sorry to say but she was raised on MITO's teachings of the uzumaki her family and knows that family comes first, so with stories with her and minato neglecting/abandoning naruto to train his siblings cause of a prophecy is stupid and a redundant plot, cause only way kushina would follow that would be to have a seal on her, and ill say it Minato being the idealistic fool he is and literally believes everything jairiya tells him i believe if kishimoto wanted to have a darker naruto story to show truth of what real ninja do then yes i believe minato would of been obsessed with the prophecy to make it come true.
yep didn't even read cause reason being is your reviewer decided it for me, reason being is this a redemption fic so ill just say this there is no redemption for them at all you don't abandon your child for any reason what so ever so there is no excuse for it, if you believe he should forgive them especially KUSHINA then your naïve and have never had it happen to you, you believe in the concept that those who have been abandon for simple reasons should just forgive the parent/parents who abandon you especially in naruto's case so in the end no he should never forgive her and she should just go about her business because she failed as an UZUMAKI who are know to put FAMILY ABOVE ANY AND ALL THINGS NO MATTER WHAT so to abandon him cause of fear. This is why i hate read abandon/neglect fictions because every author has this belief that naruto should forgive his parents, which i believe is ridiculous to begin with, plus i hate how people portray kushina as a bad parent and what not im sorry to say but she was raised on MITO's teachings of the uzumaki her family and knows that family comes first, so with stories with her and minato neglecting/abandoning naruto to train his siblings cause of a prophecy is stupid and a redundant plot, cause only way kushina would follow that would be to have a seal on her, and ill say it Minato being the idealistic fool he is and literally believes everything jairiya tells him i believe if kishimoto wanted to have a darker naruto story to show truth of what real ninja do then yes i believe minato would of been obsessed with the prophecy to make it come true.
1/8/2020 c16 SPark681
Hmm, so Kushina has an uphill battle ahead of her anyways keep up the great work!
Hmm, so Kushina has an uphill battle ahead of her anyways keep up the great work!
1/8/2020 c16 Rebmul
kinda cant wait for more suffering so glad to see a update for this thought it was dead
kinda cant wait for more suffering so glad to see a update for this thought it was dead
1/8/2020 c16 darth56
asking her to come in his home and saying it is hers to is to much she is not married to the 4th any more so she is not really going to her house and to have him act so nice is just wrong but it is your story and has been a great read thanks
asking her to come in his home and saying it is hers to is to much she is not married to the 4th any more so she is not really going to her house and to have him act so nice is just wrong but it is your story and has been a great read thanks
1/7/2020 c16 King Popoto
OK, I'm done. You're seriously going to have him forgive her? Because what she genuinely feels guilty and shit? Yeah no, she had several chances to just go to Konoha and take him with her but no she did not.
She doesn't deserve forgiveness. Hell her reason for abandoning Naruto was absolutely crap as well, She is an extremely powerful kunoichi so her worrying about the villagers killing her and Yuuka just to make Naruto suffer is bloody stupid.
So all in all having him forgive her would be a terrible choice and I honestly hope you don't go through with it.
OK, I'm done. You're seriously going to have him forgive her? Because what she genuinely feels guilty and shit? Yeah no, she had several chances to just go to Konoha and take him with her but no she did not.
She doesn't deserve forgiveness. Hell her reason for abandoning Naruto was absolutely crap as well, She is an extremely powerful kunoichi so her worrying about the villagers killing her and Yuuka just to make Naruto suffer is bloody stupid.
So all in all having him forgive her would be a terrible choice and I honestly hope you don't go through with it.
1/7/2020 c16 46Animaman
Well, it's a start towards redemption. Guessing each fiance is going to demand answers from Kushina on the reasoning behind being out of Naruto's life for so long, while giving her some more history into his life. While also revealing if she was close to any of the fiances's families, they get to share what what their families would like her to know.
Still, one thing to consider is maybe a flashback from what Kushina and Yuka had to go through after their return. Like are there still haters in the villages that are foolish enough to believe that they returned to put Naruto 'in his place,' hoping to gain a more powerful ally, only for them to expose certain fibs that the Elders might have told.
46AnimamanWell, it's a start towards redemption. Guessing each fiance is going to demand answers from Kushina on the reasoning behind being out of Naruto's life for so long, while giving her some more history into his life. While also revealing if she was close to any of the fiances's families, they get to share what what their families would like her to know.
Still, one thing to consider is maybe a flashback from what Kushina and Yuka had to go through after their return. Like are there still haters in the villages that are foolish enough to believe that they returned to put Naruto 'in his place,' hoping to gain a more powerful ally, only for them to expose certain fibs that the Elders might have told.
1/7/2020 c16 2Mike Kromer
Must have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next
2Mike KromerMust have more asap. Love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next
1/7/2020 c1 Xzplakq
You don't need to write long author notee. Just wrote disclaimer and go to actual story..
You don't need to write long author notee. Just wrote disclaimer and go to actual story..
1/7/2020 c8 Xzplakq
You know you need to remove all author notes.. I feel like i'm reading author notes rather than actual story itself...
You know you need to remove all author notes.. I feel like i'm reading author notes rather than actual story itself...