for Return of the Uzumakis Redone5/19 c16 Laurie Kenneth
Every word feels like it belongs exactly where it is. You have a rare talent for rhythm and flow in storytelling. Your creativity really shines through in this story . It’s so original and refreshing to read something that feels so different from everything else out there . You’ve got a true gift for storytelling! – Laurie Kenneth
Every word feels like it belongs exactly where it is. You have a rare talent for rhythm and flow in storytelling. Your creativity really shines through in this story . It’s so original and refreshing to read something that feels so different from everything else out there . You’ve got a true gift for storytelling! – Laurie Kenneth
4/2 c16 ForMyselfInTheFuture
ends with him rolling over and forgiving her and then is abandoned. Zero point in reading this.
ends with him rolling over and forgiving her and then is abandoned. Zero point in reading this.
2/19/2023 c1 Guest
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2/13/2023 c16 Panther-Strife
This story is...OK...you should pair Naruto with Chi-Chi...she deserves happiness.
This story is...OK...you should pair Naruto with Chi-Chi...she deserves happiness.
8/16/2022 c5 Guest
So this trash is just porn why I'm I not surprised
So this trash is just porn why I'm I not surprised
807/18/2022 c15 YeagerMeister31
Well, that was an interesting chapter kind of amusing that Hashirama's not so well respected anymore and only got himself to blame for that.
Well, that was an interesting chapter kind of amusing that Hashirama's not so well respected anymore and only got himself to blame for that.
7/18/2022 c14 YeagerMeister31
Interesting I wonder if her old friends will want a piece of her like Tsume, Yoshino, and other mums.
Interesting I wonder if her old friends will want a piece of her like Tsume, Yoshino, and other mums.
7/18/2022 c11 YeagerMeister31
Well, that was amusing I can't wait for more and what other torture Kushia has to endure.
Well, that was amusing I can't wait for more and what other torture Kushia has to endure.
7/18/2022 c10 YeagerMeister31
Well that was cute can't really blame Yuuka so I wonder what happens next.
Well that was cute can't really blame Yuuka so I wonder what happens next.