for The Sorcerer's Apprentices8/21/2012 c18 Nobody
Hallo, Nobody here yet again!
Oh...is it really over? That is so sad...
Oh...a new and improved version? Wonderful!
Now, lets see...what advise can I give an author who has already written a perfect story? :-)
I think my favorite chapters were the ones involving Merlin and Yasmin/Igraine, especially KING and GUITAR. Their friendship was so lovely.
Though I also really liked the chapters that had all of the "main" people before they remembered who they used to be, like in CLUES.
The few suggestions I have are that you make they scattering of historical chapters a little less...I don't know, is cryptic the right word? Of course, I began to read your story while I was ill, so my mind was a bit addled. If I read them again, everything might be perfectly clear! I really loved these chapters though. It was so interesting to find out how Merlin spent all those very long years.
I am sort of embarrassed to say it, but I also had some problems remembering which of "Martin's" sisters is which of the Ladies from legend :-}
Really, if you could just post a list of "this one that one" problem would be solved! Of course, I could just do this my self...
My apologies, Nobody is a little silly tonight.
Anyway, Nobody's sincere congratulations on a wonderful story well finished!
Please, please, please continue writing! You have a gift.
I am,
as always,
sincerely true,
in declaring myself,
- Nobody
Hallo, Nobody here yet again!
Oh...is it really over? That is so sad...
Oh...a new and improved version? Wonderful!
Now, lets see...what advise can I give an author who has already written a perfect story? :-)
I think my favorite chapters were the ones involving Merlin and Yasmin/Igraine, especially KING and GUITAR. Their friendship was so lovely.
Though I also really liked the chapters that had all of the "main" people before they remembered who they used to be, like in CLUES.
The few suggestions I have are that you make they scattering of historical chapters a little less...I don't know, is cryptic the right word? Of course, I began to read your story while I was ill, so my mind was a bit addled. If I read them again, everything might be perfectly clear! I really loved these chapters though. It was so interesting to find out how Merlin spent all those very long years.
I am sort of embarrassed to say it, but I also had some problems remembering which of "Martin's" sisters is which of the Ladies from legend :-}
Really, if you could just post a list of "this one that one" problem would be solved! Of course, I could just do this my self...
My apologies, Nobody is a little silly tonight.
Anyway, Nobody's sincere congratulations on a wonderful story well finished!
Please, please, please continue writing! You have a gift.
I am,
as always,
sincerely true,
in declaring myself,
- Nobody
8/21/2012 c18 Aurora-dawn89
Aww I enjoyed all that! But look forward to the re-updates. Will you be adding to what happens in doubt...
Aww I enjoyed all that! But look forward to the re-updates. Will you be adding to what happens in doubt...
8/20/2012 c18 
164Kitty O
Aw don't move it around. Now that I know the plan, I like it. Also, you'll wreck up your reviews.
I like it. Good ending, though Melinda and Arthur aren't cowards.
164Kitty OAw don't move it around. Now that I know the plan, I like it. Also, you'll wreck up your reviews.
I like it. Good ending, though Melinda and Arthur aren't cowards.
8/20/2012 c16 25Feste the Fool
Enjoying this rather odd story, but I have to say it...thank you for NOT promoting that hideous THING they have the gall to call a Dark is Rising movie.
25Feste the FoolEnjoying this rather odd story, but I have to say it...thank you for NOT promoting that hideous THING they have the gall to call a Dark is Rising movie.
8/20/2012 c18 askjhdashd
Wow, I absolutely love this story! My favorite time is the one with all the reincarnations. I love the characters you made up and the ones you added to (like Nimueh and Vivian). Could you please write another story with this crew? You're a great writer and you've set up a great story universe.
Wow, I absolutely love this story! My favorite time is the one with all the reincarnations. I love the characters you made up and the ones you added to (like Nimueh and Vivian). Could you please write another story with this crew? You're a great writer and you've set up a great story universe.
8/20/2012 c18 1CarolinaEirasSa
I'm sad to see this go... :(
But very happy I read it. :)
A great fanfic, that I'll re-read very soon, for sure. It'll be fun to look back on things and to think "How could I have missed that?! *facepalm*".
Congratulations on finishing this amazing story :D
1CarolinaEirasSaI'm sad to see this go... :(
But very happy I read it. :)
A great fanfic, that I'll re-read very soon, for sure. It'll be fun to look back on things and to think "How could I have missed that?! *facepalm*".
Congratulations on finishing this amazing story :D
8/19/2012 c17 1Katalytic Reaction
Oh, right, the poll! Did I take it? I should check. Anyways, MERLIN LOST HIS ACCENT! OH NOESSS... Our poor Merly... he... he... LOST HIS ACCENT! *Long theatrical sobbing*
1Katalytic ReactionOh, right, the poll! Did I take it? I should check. Anyways, MERLIN LOST HIS ACCENT! OH NOESSS... Our poor Merly... he... he... LOST HIS ACCENT! *Long theatrical sobbing*
8/18/2012 c17 1CarolinaEirasSa
:'( I'm nearly crying but it's not because of sadness. This last scene was just so... So... :) :'( :) I don't know whether to laugh or to cry. Maybe I can do both...
I really can't wait for the epilogue, although I'm also really sad to see this story an end. But all good things must come to one, don't they? :)
Great, excellent, perfect work.
1CarolinaEirasSa:'( I'm nearly crying but it's not because of sadness. This last scene was just so... So... :) :'( :) I don't know whether to laugh or to cry. Maybe I can do both...
I really can't wait for the epilogue, although I'm also really sad to see this story an end. But all good things must come to one, don't they? :)
Great, excellent, perfect work.
8/18/2012 c15 CarolinaEirasSa
Wow. Just... wow.
It's amazing to see all the pieces slowly coming together... And Arthur's reaction to it had me both smiling in anticipation and cringing in sympathy.
Great work, as always :)
Wow. Just... wow.
It's amazing to see all the pieces slowly coming together... And Arthur's reaction to it had me both smiling in anticipation and cringing in sympathy.
Great work, as always :)
8/17/2012 c17 164Kitty O
Oh goodness. You're killing me, lol.
I loved it. You tie this together so well.
"Things may have turned out differently this time around, but that wasn't necessarily a bad thing. Because if there had ever been a better swordsman in Camelot than Arthur Pendragon, it had been his father." I know how you must feel about language, but I have to say it anyway.
AW. HELL. YES. As Southern as possible.
Uther, I love you till the end of the earth!
164Kitty OOh goodness. You're killing me, lol.
I loved it. You tie this together so well.
"Things may have turned out differently this time around, but that wasn't necessarily a bad thing. Because if there had ever been a better swordsman in Camelot than Arthur Pendragon, it had been his father." I know how you must feel about language, but I have to say it anyway.
AW. HELL. YES. As Southern as possible.
Uther, I love you till the end of the earth!
8/15/2012 c16 Guest
Sorry it took me so long to read and review! School, you know.
Wow. I am seriously in shock. I didn't think this was coming together! I thought these were oneshots! I disnt realize, and I am amazed :)
Good job.
I hope Ninaine, etc, are on our side this time!
Also, does Mordred have Leon? And what did Uther see?
Poor Leon, but seriously, I'm sure he's gon' be fiiiine. He's immortal.
Also thanks for mentioning me in the beginning. It got me a very nice review on XMtM.
Sorry it took me so long to read and review! School, you know.
Wow. I am seriously in shock. I didn't think this was coming together! I thought these were oneshots! I disnt realize, and I am amazed :)
Good job.
I hope Ninaine, etc, are on our side this time!
Also, does Mordred have Leon? And what did Uther see?
Poor Leon, but seriously, I'm sure he's gon' be fiiiine. He's immortal.
Also thanks for mentioning me in the beginning. It got me a very nice review on XMtM.
8/15/2012 c16 Guest
Wow, I'm really afraid the girls are just there to trick and then try to defeat Arthur. Eeek, I can't wait for more!
Wow, I'm really afraid the girls are just there to trick and then try to defeat Arthur. Eeek, I can't wait for more!
8/14/2012 c16 Arnia
Picture abhi bhaki he. Om right? I watched that movie!
Picture abhi bhaki he. Om right? I watched that movie!
8/13/2012 c16 Nobody
Hallo, Nobody here again!
Oh my goodness!
Is it silly that I feel like I just got a shout-out from a celebrity!? :)
Add in the Bollywood and The Doctor, and you are an absolutely perfect writer!
Seriously though, I do believe this is one of the best chapters so far!
I loved the way you connected Vivian from the last chapter and Anne in this chapter. I had to stop and read the line over again in amazement!
I truly never thought of connecting the Sisters of Avalon (or what ever you chose to call the nine sisters of Avalon/the many Ladies of the Lake/the scattering of princesses or ladies with those names in the show) with the three adopted sisters of Merlin in your story.
I am a true romantic, and love a good happy ending for everyone concerned, so thank you for at least giving Morgana/Miriam and the Sisters a chance!
Brilliant writing!
I am,
as always,
sincerely true,
in saying I am,
- Nobody
Hallo, Nobody here again!
Oh my goodness!
Is it silly that I feel like I just got a shout-out from a celebrity!? :)
Add in the Bollywood and The Doctor, and you are an absolutely perfect writer!
Seriously though, I do believe this is one of the best chapters so far!
I loved the way you connected Vivian from the last chapter and Anne in this chapter. I had to stop and read the line over again in amazement!
I truly never thought of connecting the Sisters of Avalon (or what ever you chose to call the nine sisters of Avalon/the many Ladies of the Lake/the scattering of princesses or ladies with those names in the show) with the three adopted sisters of Merlin in your story.
I am a true romantic, and love a good happy ending for everyone concerned, so thank you for at least giving Morgana/Miriam and the Sisters a chance!
Brilliant writing!
I am,
as always,
sincerely true,
in saying I am,
- Nobody