8/10/2012 c15 1Katalytic Reaction
So you've been feeding us filler chapters, eh? I feel like I should be mad or something, but I really want you to update the next chapter(s). Well it's history repeating itself over and over. The song remains the same. The only difference is the singer.
So you've been feeding us filler chapters, eh? I feel like I should be mad or something, but I really want you to update the next chapter(s). Well it's history repeating itself over and over. The song remains the same. The only difference is the singer.
8/7/2012 c15 14Soului
Ohh, it's all coming together now! I know you were probably frustrated with the 'filler' chapters, but they really were essential to setting up the return of Arthur in a modern setting. I absolutely love the moments where you see Merlin working behind the scenes to see that destiny is fulfilled.
I can't wait to see their reunion.
Ohh, it's all coming together now! I know you were probably frustrated with the 'filler' chapters, but they really were essential to setting up the return of Arthur in a modern setting. I absolutely love the moments where you see Merlin working behind the scenes to see that destiny is fulfilled.
I can't wait to see their reunion.
8/6/2012 c15 164Kitty O
I remembered most of it, though I can't quite recall whatever happened to Vivian after the whole trapping Zmerlin thing, though Morgana got stuck protecting Arthur.
I was this close to not reading this chapter. I hate long chapters. I usually won't read a multiple chapter story with more than 3000-4000 words per chapter. 8000? You were more than pushing it. I do it cuz I like your stuff. *glare*
They are all getting gathered together? I guessed that when Percy showed up. And Glen is Gwaine. Where's the rest?
I remembered most of it, though I can't quite recall whatever happened to Vivian after the whole trapping Zmerlin thing, though Morgana got stuck protecting Arthur.
I was this close to not reading this chapter. I hate long chapters. I usually won't read a multiple chapter story with more than 3000-4000 words per chapter. 8000? You were more than pushing it. I do it cuz I like your stuff. *glare*
They are all getting gathered together? I guessed that when Percy showed up. And Glen is Gwaine. Where's the rest?
8/6/2012 c15 Nobody
Hey! We may be few and far between, but at least Nobody is an Arthurian enthusiasts who's first thought was "Merry, the great and wonderful Gumerry!"
Now, are you going to leave Nobody hanging, or are you going to add in The Dark is Rising Sequence?
This is half in jest, as your story is the closest to perfection I have read in a long while just the way it is!
Though Will making an appearance would be grand...
And, I have little to no idea how Bran might fit in, but it might be a very interesting development.
Any way, it is very good to know that there are other people out there who know what The Light and The Dark really are.
I am,
of course,
sincerely true,
in saying I am,
- Nobody
Hey! We may be few and far between, but at least Nobody is an Arthurian enthusiasts who's first thought was "Merry, the great and wonderful Gumerry!"
Now, are you going to leave Nobody hanging, or are you going to add in The Dark is Rising Sequence?
This is half in jest, as your story is the closest to perfection I have read in a long while just the way it is!
Though Will making an appearance would be grand...
And, I have little to no idea how Bran might fit in, but it might be a very interesting development.
Any way, it is very good to know that there are other people out there who know what The Light and The Dark really are.
I am,
of course,
sincerely true,
in saying I am,
- Nobody
7/26/2012 c14 1CarolinaEirasSa
(You're welcome :D)
Great chapter, as usual :)
Too bad it wasn't longer, but I guess it's ok. At least I'd rather read a shorter good chapter than a longer mess, and this one is obviously good.
I can barely wait to read the next one...
(You're welcome :D)
Great chapter, as usual :)
Too bad it wasn't longer, but I guess it's ok. At least I'd rather read a shorter good chapter than a longer mess, and this one is obviously good.
I can barely wait to read the next one...
7/23/2012 c14 164Kitty O
It isn't because of Lord of the Rings and Watson/Bilbo? That's way o had assumed,
It was a good chapter. And I do agree that less is more! I find lengthy chapters painful and often hard to read. Glad to help!
It isn't because of Lord of the Rings and Watson/Bilbo? That's way o had assumed,
It was a good chapter. And I do agree that less is more! I find lengthy chapters painful and often hard to read. Glad to help!
7/9/2012 c13 1CarolinaEirasSa
(Sorry, the guest review is mine... I've no idea why fanfiction posted it as Guest when I was logged in...)
This story is incredible! Even though most chapters are pretty distanced in time, they all seem to be connected somehow, and it just makes me want to know what will be shown the next time, and the next time, and the next one, and the next,... and so on.
I understand why you can't update very regularly, but I still hope to be able to read the next chapter really soon.
Even having to wait so much for every bit of story, I'll have to go by your word and wait for the ending hoping to be "rewarded", because I see no way for me to give up on it. Some things are simply worth the wait, and this story is definitely on of those. :)
I just think it's strange that this story doesn't have more reviews... (Please don't take this badly. Just trying to help...) Have you considered changing the summary? When I first saw a reference to this story in a AN on "Fractions", I looked it up and I must confess that the summary didn't exactly warm me up to it. I just really understood how this story would move forward by the end of the first chapter, and that was what made me to keep reading it. If the summary showed a bit of that, of the story's feeling, I really believe you'd have even more readers than you already have. Just my opinion...
(Filigree? I love it! :D There're lots of really complex filigree pieces in my country. Mostly jewelry though, and most of those are this kind of odd-shaped heart which takes part in some old traditions. They're all beautiful and absolutely unique.)
Can't wait to read more... Bye!
(Sorry, the guest review is mine... I've no idea why fanfiction posted it as Guest when I was logged in...)
This story is incredible! Even though most chapters are pretty distanced in time, they all seem to be connected somehow, and it just makes me want to know what will be shown the next time, and the next time, and the next one, and the next,... and so on.
I understand why you can't update very regularly, but I still hope to be able to read the next chapter really soon.
Even having to wait so much for every bit of story, I'll have to go by your word and wait for the ending hoping to be "rewarded", because I see no way for me to give up on it. Some things are simply worth the wait, and this story is definitely on of those. :)
I just think it's strange that this story doesn't have more reviews... (Please don't take this badly. Just trying to help...) Have you considered changing the summary? When I first saw a reference to this story in a AN on "Fractions", I looked it up and I must confess that the summary didn't exactly warm me up to it. I just really understood how this story would move forward by the end of the first chapter, and that was what made me to keep reading it. If the summary showed a bit of that, of the story's feeling, I really believe you'd have even more readers than you already have. Just my opinion...
(Filigree? I love it! :D There're lots of really complex filigree pieces in my country. Mostly jewelry though, and most of those are this kind of odd-shaped heart which takes part in some old traditions. They're all beautiful and absolutely unique.)
Can't wait to read more... Bye!
7/9/2012 c13 Guest
This story is incredible! Even though most chapters are pretty distanced in time, they all seem to be connected somehow, and it just makes me want to know what will be shown the next time, and the next time, and the next one, and the next,... and so on.
I understand why you can't update very regularly, but I still hope to be able to read the next chapter really soon.
Even having to wait so much for every bit of story, I'll have to go by your word and wait for the ending hoping to be "rewarded", because I see no way for me to give up on it. Some things are simply worth the wait, and this story is definitely on of those. :)
I just think it's strange that this story doesn't have more reviews... (Please don't take this badly. Just trying to help...) Have you considered changing the summary? When I first saw a reference to this story in a AN on "Fractions", I looked it up and I must confess that the summary didn't exactly warm me up to it. I just really understood how this story would move forward by the end of the first chapter, and that was what made me to keep reading it. If the summary showed a bit of that, of the story's feeling, I really believe you'd have even more readers than you already have. Just my opinion...
(Filigree? I love it! :D There're lots of really complex filigree pieces in my country. Mostly jewelry though, and most of those are this kind of odd-shaped heart which takes part in some old traditions. They're all beautiful and absolutely unique.)
Can't wait to read more... Bye!
This story is incredible! Even though most chapters are pretty distanced in time, they all seem to be connected somehow, and it just makes me want to know what will be shown the next time, and the next time, and the next one, and the next,... and so on.
I understand why you can't update very regularly, but I still hope to be able to read the next chapter really soon.
Even having to wait so much for every bit of story, I'll have to go by your word and wait for the ending hoping to be "rewarded", because I see no way for me to give up on it. Some things are simply worth the wait, and this story is definitely on of those. :)
I just think it's strange that this story doesn't have more reviews... (Please don't take this badly. Just trying to help...) Have you considered changing the summary? When I first saw a reference to this story in a AN on "Fractions", I looked it up and I must confess that the summary didn't exactly warm me up to it. I just really understood how this story would move forward by the end of the first chapter, and that was what made me to keep reading it. If the summary showed a bit of that, of the story's feeling, I really believe you'd have even more readers than you already have. Just my opinion...
(Filigree? I love it! :D There're lots of really complex filigree pieces in my country. Mostly jewelry though, and most of those are this kind of odd-shaped heart which takes part in some old traditions. They're all beautiful and absolutely unique.)
Can't wait to read more... Bye!
5/2/2012 c13 askjhdashd
I love this story! I'm so curious about all the little individual storylines going on (like what's happening in Camelot, what's up with Merlin's "sisters" and Arthur's reincarnation). Please update soon!
I love this story! I'm so curious about all the little individual storylines going on (like what's happening in Camelot, what's up with Merlin's "sisters" and Arthur's reincarnation). Please update soon!
4/25/2012 c13 Pagen
loved this. i feel so bad for merlin though living for so long and having to watch everyone hestarts to care about die. its no wonder that the eye of the pheonix tempted him. and yes i remembered his cousin and did suspect that it was her i just wanted to be sure. oh and i find i must ask you another question. will arthur be making an appearence in the modern world. his presence would do merlin a world of good.
loved this. i feel so bad for merlin though living for so long and having to watch everyone hestarts to care about die. its no wonder that the eye of the pheonix tempted him. and yes i remembered his cousin and did suspect that it was her i just wanted to be sure. oh and i find i must ask you another question. will arthur be making an appearence in the modern world. his presence would do merlin a world of good.
4/25/2012 c13 164Kitty O
But this is set before he adopts those kids, right?
No, wait. This is in the year 1600 somethign. I wondered what those numbers meant.
Interesting. We haven't changed much... Seems like we've gone backwards.
I don't know if he'll use it or not. I think, after a few thousand years, my thoughts on suicide aside- I might just be crazy enough to use it.
Very nice.
But does this mean you'll never write a chapter where that farmer guy (italian?) with the daughter finally betrays him?
But this is set before he adopts those kids, right?
No, wait. This is in the year 1600 somethign. I wondered what those numbers meant.
Interesting. We haven't changed much... Seems like we've gone backwards.
I don't know if he'll use it or not. I think, after a few thousand years, my thoughts on suicide aside- I might just be crazy enough to use it.
Very nice.
But does this mean you'll never write a chapter where that farmer guy (italian?) with the daughter finally betrays him?
4/25/2012 c13 1Katalytic Reaction
Wow. Very nice. Loved this. Would someone try to get it then try to kill Merlin? Loved this whole spy theme, and this story is awesome, no matter how late it is! Great job, update soon!
Wow. Very nice. Loved this. Would someone try to get it then try to kill Merlin? Loved this whole spy theme, and this story is awesome, no matter how late it is! Great job, update soon!
3/24/2012 c12 164Kitty O
AWW
this whole chapter gave me that feeling in the pit of your stomach like "this is not going to end well; friendship is dying!"
It's the feeling when Brutus decides to stab Caesar. The feeling when Morgana lies to Merlin in 3.01. The feelign when you read about Arthurian legend and how much Arthur loves Guinevere.
...THAT feeling. very sad.
i did like it, though it was long... I'm never getting that chapter written today...
AWW
this whole chapter gave me that feeling in the pit of your stomach like "this is not going to end well; friendship is dying!"
It's the feeling when Brutus decides to stab Caesar. The feeling when Morgana lies to Merlin in 3.01. The feelign when you read about Arthurian legend and how much Arthur loves Guinevere.
...THAT feeling. very sad.
i did like it, though it was long... I'm never getting that chapter written today...