
10/29/2017 c14 Guest
Um..I don't know what to say but this is pretty bad. No plot, barely any linked storyline... everything was just so jumbled and the drama? How old are u for u to think drama like all these actually happen in 1 go?
Um..I don't know what to say but this is pretty bad. No plot, barely any linked storyline... everything was just so jumbled and the drama? How old are u for u to think drama like all these actually happen in 1 go?
6/11/2014 c13 Guest
WHYD YOU END LIKE THIS! CRUSHING MY SOUL! YOU NEED TO FINISH I LOVE IT THERE HAS TO BE MORE! please 3
WHYD YOU END LIKE THIS! CRUSHING MY SOUL! YOU NEED TO FINISH I LOVE IT THERE HAS TO BE MORE! please 3
7/3/2013 c12 lovely smile
OMG! More! More!
OMG! More! More!
6/3/2013 c11
3Dark Lord of the X-Men
Yes, that is a word... :P
AWESOME! Is belladonna really going to try to escape, is she going to blow off her Fiance and get together with some random dude? whats gonna happen?! post the next chapter so we aren't left in suspense for the rest of our lives! :D

Yes, that is a word... :P
AWESOME! Is belladonna really going to try to escape, is she going to blow off her Fiance and get together with some random dude? whats gonna happen?! post the next chapter so we aren't left in suspense for the rest of our lives! :D
6/2/2013 c11
2SwampRat91
PLEASE tell me that you're finishing this! It's AMAZING and I need to know how it ends!

PLEASE tell me that you're finishing this! It's AMAZING and I need to know how it ends!
6/1/2013 c10 lovely smile
Great story hope to read more soon
Great story hope to read more soon
5/31/2013 c10
3Dark Lord of the X-Men
This is actually pretty good! I like how you incorporated the Cannon Logan/Jean relationship, but maybe you otta ditch the whole Bobby/Kitty thing and bring back the other cannon relationships, like Bobby/Jubilee or Bobby/Lorna and Kitty/Piotr (Colossus). PLEASE POST MORE SOON!

This is actually pretty good! I like how you incorporated the Cannon Logan/Jean relationship, but maybe you otta ditch the whole Bobby/Kitty thing and bring back the other cannon relationships, like Bobby/Jubilee or Bobby/Lorna and Kitty/Piotr (Colossus). PLEASE POST MORE SOON!
1/14/2012 c8
24whitechocolate14
Jean's mama drama is funny to me for some reason. Her of all people don't know who's baby it is! I now see why my grandmother watches so many soap operas, the DRAMA is so good!

Jean's mama drama is funny to me for some reason. Her of all people don't know who's baby it is! I now see why my grandmother watches so many soap operas, the DRAMA is so good!
11/19/2011 c7 Asilanna Dark-witch
I have to admit, I'm super excited to see how Wanda will handle everything! :)
I have to admit, I'm super excited to see how Wanda will handle everything! :)
11/10/2011 c5 whitechocolate14
ok, i was mad before at the beginning, but i forgive u. u better not do that again!
ok, i was mad before at the beginning, but i forgive u. u better not do that again!
11/10/2011 c4 whitechocolate14
ok, i was like, "awww" then "huh" then "oh" then "aw" again, then"WHAT! NO!" then "Nooooo!" then "yay!" so it was good.:)
ok, i was like, "awww" then "huh" then "oh" then "aw" again, then"WHAT! NO!" then "Nooooo!" then "yay!" so it was good.:)