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10/19/2014 c1 Guest
Always thought Medic was older than Soldier, but even if he wasn't, I don't think Solly would be THAT older...
7/25/2011 c1 ArcticFoxKit
It's not often that a story makes me laugh the way this one did. Great job!

I think it's interesting that this didn't start out as fanfiction. I did that before to test out a short story... I've found that this community does an excellent job of providing feedback- you just have to tweak your story a little.
6/15/2011 c1 8Itanu
Writer's Blah...

...I do not know where to start. I can start with this- I couldn't stop laughing!

Now, your grammar and spelling? Flawless, to my sight. Well-done.

Characterization? Spot-on.

And the Soldier's story (as well as the twist therein)? Grimly hilarious!

I also love how you combined what we know of Soldier with actual history. I found that to make the story even more engrossing than it would have been if it had been totally invented from imagination.

All-in-all, a great little humor fic! I love-love-LOVE it!

Until next time!

Signed with Humility,

Itanu the Author.
6/12/2011 c1 CarrotStructure
All I have to say to Soldier is... Smoooth (and poor Medic :()

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