for Life Lived In Dreams6/16/2012 c1 
1intrepidity-and-dandelions
This was really amazing, you captured her character so well! I enjoyed this so much.
1intrepidity-and-dandelionsThis was really amazing, you captured her character so well! I enjoyed this so much.
8/9/2011 c1 68CraftyNotepad
It is always a treat when a reviewer has the opportunity to be the first to comment upon a work.
The beauty of her dreams must be her reality. What rational mind would embrace her waking world over the elysian one she escapes to while she slumbers? Her dreams are nigh -perfect: "He loves her too much." Marius, in her mind, adores her, cherishes her, yet it is all about Eponine; she never permits herself to envisage a Marius driven by his own passion. In her retreat, they are engaged in a perpetual state of romance, an element foreign to her own personal hell.
Effective contrasting of the lover of her life vs. the men in her life. You effectively illustrated why she will forever search only in her dreams for release from the perdition she's condemned to. Your story in not simply entertaining; you've capture a character analysis and presented to us in story form. Impressive!
Best
CraftyNotepad
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68CraftyNotepadIt is always a treat when a reviewer has the opportunity to be the first to comment upon a work.
The beauty of her dreams must be her reality. What rational mind would embrace her waking world over the elysian one she escapes to while she slumbers? Her dreams are nigh -perfect: "He loves her too much." Marius, in her mind, adores her, cherishes her, yet it is all about Eponine; she never permits herself to envisage a Marius driven by his own passion. In her retreat, they are engaged in a perpetual state of romance, an element foreign to her own personal hell.
Effective contrasting of the lover of her life vs. the men in her life. You effectively illustrated why she will forever search only in her dreams for release from the perdition she's condemned to. Your story in not simply entertaining; you've capture a character analysis and presented to us in story form. Impressive!
Best
CraftyNotepad
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