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9/12/2015 c8 DanteNaru
cool
8/8/2015 c8 ARSLOTHES
looking forward to when you decide to update this fic again
6/19/2015 c8 Rakaan
Makes me sad that the next arc isn't happening, given it's been years since this one ended.
6/3/2015 c5 polarpwnage
Projecting normal blade for Shirou only costs like 10 units of prana compared so any other non bladed items which are like 5x more. Not to mention he's tracing mundane blade and not noble phantasms, so he should be able to make at least couple dozen taking into account how new he is using his circuits
6/3/2015 c2 polarpwnage
I don't know where this is going, if Shirou never participates in the Grail war, then he has no arsenal for his UBW, without that he's useless unless u do a deus ex machina and give him an overpowered device which basically invalidates Emiya Shirou. You should've just had post war Shirou in this fic
5/10/2015 c8 Jay06
Awesome story I loved the way you wrote the shirou his evolution really hope you write the second arc
2/5/2015 c8 all forms of fluff
I got to say this is an interesting cross over. I am not sure you can actually sustain it into the grail war as advertised as Kitsuragi would need to be alive to explain the Master seals if they appear. I am a bit disapointed that you have given Shirou all the weapons in Unlimited Blade works, even if he can't Trace them yet. I also felt it was a bit of a cheep tatic to make Tracing part of the the Seed, inless thats just a smoke screen and it was a natural development and everyone just played it off as coming from an outside source. I am kinda also thrown by his Golem sword wielding. I get that he could trace the gient weapons, its the actually using them as weapons and not launching them like he did against chrono. I guess its a mental image thing that just didn't fly with me but it wasn't a bad scean. All in all I have enjoyed the story so far and I am looking forward to War of the Knight Sky. If it is as well put together as the Seed Hunt then I am sure it will be well recived. So untill next time, Thank you for the story and I hope you contine having as much fun writing as I have had reading.
11/26/2014 c8 Nine
Two years later and not a hint to be seen...
6/11/2014 c8 1PanickingNoob
That was one interesting story, nice interact between characters. All of them in character, although have to wonder will Kiritsugi still going to die? How will Nanoha' group fare against the hero from the past? Man can't wait for next arc hope it happen soon
5/6/2014 c8 Renko-san
Is this one still the same as the other MSLD in Beast Lair? I am now confuse!
4/1/2014 c8 Guest
This story is great. Though I am still waiting for the sequel. I really wish you'll start working on it and not thinking about making another reboot.
2/28/2014 c8 Eurigos
awesome
1/15/2014 c8 The Wandering Soul of 1014
Please, you have GOT to continue this. This was epic!

Quick question though: the only way to remove that jewel Seed, will that involve UBW?
12/31/2013 c8 6A Common Hero
It saddens me greatly that this fic hasn't updated in over a year. To most eyes that means the story is dead, and I admit it seems probable. 99%.

The great strength of this story is its characterization. Shirou, a character I despised in the anime (I have not read the original VN) is written beautifully here. I always thought that Shirou's particular character probably must have worked much better in written from than he did in animation. It's just impossible to fully get into his unique brain in that art form.

Shirou's characterization in this fic is spot on, but so is Nanoha. Her own unyielding kindness, something very much like Shirou's self destructive urge, is on full display here. But the difference, that she knows how to temper herself if only a little, puts a stark contrast between the two. It is such that you can almost believe Nanoha will save Shirou from being a hero.

Almost, but not quite, which leads to the story's other great strength. Most fics that changed the story so little as what happens here would be pretty dreadful. Shirou seems to come into Nanoha's world, and changes absolutely nothing. The outcome is exactly the same, all the events happen in roughly the same fashion (Jewel Seed induced Unlimited Blade Works not withstanding), only Shirou is changed at all. Yet this is precisely what makes this story so brilliant. Shirou can't change anything. He's in over his head, and despite this he presses onwards as only Shirou can. He achieves nothing by doing this, as is his curse.

It reminds me so much of Archer's chant:

"Have withstood pain to create many weapons
Yet, those hands will never hold anything"

Though I will not hold my breath, I eagerly await the return of this story.
11/13/2013 c8 sl0bad
Hello, what a good read so far, looking forward to see more of Your work.
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