for Oresama's Nekogirisu3/10/2023 c19 
3KuroNikkieFF
Wow. I find myself appreciating Prussia more as a character after reading this.
Probably Spoilers Below:
So, first off I’ll say that I don’t usually read non-canon ship stories. I find them awkward. When I accidentally stumble across one but I’m invested in the story I’ll usually skim what I don’t want to read. That being said, by the time I made it to the end of yours, everything developed so naturally that all I could think was, “wow, this is too cute.” I actually loved it. And seriously, Prussia might have moved up on my favourite characters list after this. You voiced both England and Prussia incredibly well, in my opinion. I find a lot of people (me included, unfortunately, oof) tend to stick to the cliché interpretations of these characters (e.g. saying “bloody” every other sentence, making America refer to himself as the hero every other sentence, etc.) and even though you fell into that routine occasionally, you did go deeper. It didn’t feel out-of-character. By the end of the story, it felt like I met another side of Prussia and England in-character. Does that make sense?
Anyway, my only complaint is that I feel another scene with America would be appropriate. It felt unresolved. He was worried about England and did put in an effort to help him. He’s blaming Prussia, I know, and that is not awesome, but I feel that England and America need to have a talk about their perspectives. Poor boy was depressed the entire time England was gone only to get yelled at—not that it wasn’t deserved after certain comments.
So yeah, in conclusion, good job. Loved your story, loved the possessing pasta bit (literal lol moment).
Keep up the great work.
3KuroNikkieFFWow. I find myself appreciating Prussia more as a character after reading this.
Probably Spoilers Below:
So, first off I’ll say that I don’t usually read non-canon ship stories. I find them awkward. When I accidentally stumble across one but I’m invested in the story I’ll usually skim what I don’t want to read. That being said, by the time I made it to the end of yours, everything developed so naturally that all I could think was, “wow, this is too cute.” I actually loved it. And seriously, Prussia might have moved up on my favourite characters list after this. You voiced both England and Prussia incredibly well, in my opinion. I find a lot of people (me included, unfortunately, oof) tend to stick to the cliché interpretations of these characters (e.g. saying “bloody” every other sentence, making America refer to himself as the hero every other sentence, etc.) and even though you fell into that routine occasionally, you did go deeper. It didn’t feel out-of-character. By the end of the story, it felt like I met another side of Prussia and England in-character. Does that make sense?
Anyway, my only complaint is that I feel another scene with America would be appropriate. It felt unresolved. He was worried about England and did put in an effort to help him. He’s blaming Prussia, I know, and that is not awesome, but I feel that England and America need to have a talk about their perspectives. Poor boy was depressed the entire time England was gone only to get yelled at—not that it wasn’t deserved after certain comments.
So yeah, in conclusion, good job. Loved your story, loved the possessing pasta bit (literal lol moment).
Keep up the great work.
8/19/2018 c19 A German
I loved this story!
Fun fact regarding Prussia's and Britain's relationship? Their national anthems have the same melody ;) So in the beginning, Prussia might have heard Nekogirisu humming his own national anthem ;)
Other thing: In Germany we usually say "fuck". Nobody says "fick". Another word you could use would be "verdammt" ("damn").
Last fun fact: East Germany was also known as GDR, right? Well, in German it was DDR (Deutsche Demokratische Republik). So it's of no surprise that Prussia would dominate this game called "DDR" xD
Do whatever you want with those facts, check them if you want to, and maybe consider writing an epilogue - I would totally love that!
I loved this story!
Fun fact regarding Prussia's and Britain's relationship? Their national anthems have the same melody ;) So in the beginning, Prussia might have heard Nekogirisu humming his own national anthem ;)
Other thing: In Germany we usually say "fuck". Nobody says "fick". Another word you could use would be "verdammt" ("damn").
Last fun fact: East Germany was also known as GDR, right? Well, in German it was DDR (Deutsche Demokratische Republik). So it's of no surprise that Prussia would dominate this game called "DDR" xD
Do whatever you want with those facts, check them if you want to, and maybe consider writing an epilogue - I would totally love that!
5/11/2016 c7 MeiPhantomhive
OHONHONHONHONHON, BROTHER DEAR'S HELPIIIING~
OHONHONHONHONHON, BROTHER DEAR'S HELPIIIING~
4/28/2016 c6 Izaya-sama
AHAHAHAHAHA! GOSH! ARTHUR JUST SANG THE STEREOTYPE SONG! ;V; AHAHAHAHA! I CANT BREATHE!
AHAHAHAHAHA! GOSH! ARTHUR JUST SANG THE STEREOTYPE SONG! ;V; AHAHAHAHA! I CANT BREATHE!
4/8/2016 c19 Guest
You've got to tell me, who won the bet? England or Prussia?
You've got to tell me, who won the bet? England or Prussia?
1/13/2015 c5 56LeFay Strent
I seriously feared for Arthur in this one. I thought they were really going to neuter him. So glad they didn't. Phew.
56LeFay StrentI seriously feared for Arthur in this one. I thought they were really going to neuter him. So glad they didn't. Phew.
12/22/2014 c19 Guest
Amazing, funny, and adorable...the Limey vs lime scene really cracked me up XD
Amazing, funny, and adorable...the Limey vs lime scene really cracked me up XD
12/16/2014 c19 Prussia'sGilbird
((THIS WAS THE CUTEST THING I EVER READ! PRUK IS NOW A MUST FOR ME! I HOPE YOU RIGHT MORE STORIES ABOUT THESE TWO! I LOVED IT!))
wow admin, that was a lot of caps and exclamations. Ich thought it was cute though. And Ich do enjoy seeing mein awesome owner being happy!
((THIS WAS THE CUTEST THING I EVER READ! PRUK IS NOW A MUST FOR ME! I HOPE YOU RIGHT MORE STORIES ABOUT THESE TWO! I LOVED IT!))
wow admin, that was a lot of caps and exclamations. Ich thought it was cute though. And Ich do enjoy seeing mein awesome owner being happy!
12/15/2014 c12 Prussia'sGilbird
Am I feeling a new ship coming on? PrUk? Yep, that will indeed become a thing.
Am I feeling a new ship coming on? PrUk? Yep, that will indeed become a thing.
12/15/2014 c5 Prussia'sGilbird
((XD this is funny! i love it!))
piyopiyopipipiyo.- I wish he HAD gotten neutered.
((Gilbird! Don't be that way.))
((XD this is funny! i love it!))
piyopiyopipipiyo.- I wish he HAD gotten neutered.
((Gilbird! Don't be that way.))