for The Excursion8/9/2011 c1 
3Kurisuta358
Oh my.
Perhaps you could use indentations and start new paragraphs so that it isn't so cramped and hard to read. An author should make a new paragraph when introducing a new idea, setting, presenting dialogue, or any descriptions of characters throughout the content of the work.
3Kurisuta358Oh my.
Perhaps you could use indentations and start new paragraphs so that it isn't so cramped and hard to read. An author should make a new paragraph when introducing a new idea, setting, presenting dialogue, or any descriptions of characters throughout the content of the work.
7/9/2011 c1 Crabs the good kind
Not a very tolerable person are you?
Not a very tolerable person are you?