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8/14/2014 c1 fnoerkfngie
This is a really interesting idea. You should definitely continue! Poor Kakashi!
6/16/2011 c1 2VampireDoll666
Damn Ruka is an asshole in this, why did he betray everyone? Why did he lockup Kakashi, and Naruto?
6/15/2011 c1 73The-Lady-Smaell
Sweetie you are a sick, sick little puppy but by GOD I like it. I don't know /why/ I like psycho Iruka fics but I just do.

And this is probably the most psycho I've seen him...

In such a small amount of words you really set the scene amazingly well, the deterioration of Kakashi was brilliantly described as was Iruka's reaction to his lover.

The conversation with Naruto was exceedingly well written and Kakashi's tortured interuption made my heart ache and the end... Well I actually felt a little sick.

I hope you do more of this (or a fic to show how it got to this point), I have a feeling I would certainly enjoy reading it.

Excellent first fic sweetie! Keep up the good work.

Later

Smaell

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