for Repair My Mind5/31/2012 c2 astral171988
A fairly unique concept! I loved your simple, yet elegant and effective style of narraration. Eagerly awaiting for an update!
A fairly unique concept! I loved your simple, yet elegant and effective style of narraration. Eagerly awaiting for an update!
10/1/2011 c1 
5lazy larry
great story so far only probem is that the chapters are a ittle on the short side but beside that its a good story update soon
5lazy larrygreat story so far only probem is that the chapters are a ittle on the short side but beside that its a good story update soon
9/4/2011 c1 23Ambivalencia
This story seemed to hide a good potential. I really want to see the outcome to this. Moreover, it's a SoujiRise. :))
23AmbivalenciaThis story seemed to hide a good potential. I really want to see the outcome to this. Moreover, it's a SoujiRise. :))
7/17/2011 c1 Detective Boys
This is great! This is a nice twist on the story. Most fics are about him allways in charge and in control of his life. Whitc is NOT bad, but like I said its a nice twist! :D I hope to see more real soon!
This is great! This is a nice twist on the story. Most fics are about him allways in charge and in control of his life. Whitc is NOT bad, but like I said its a nice twist! :D I hope to see more real soon!
6/16/2011 c1 1Blazehawkins
It's definitely got promise and is an interesting starting point, especially with Souji's backstory. I'm curious as to where you plan on taking this, especially since you started writing within two hours of beating the game :)
Took me three years after I beat it to start writing, so I'm expecting great things!
1BlazehawkinsIt's definitely got promise and is an interesting starting point, especially with Souji's backstory. I'm curious as to where you plan on taking this, especially since you started writing within two hours of beating the game :)
Took me three years after I beat it to start writing, so I'm expecting great things!