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1/30/2018 c1 Lauramichca
I like how you chose to clarify and in some cases guess, details to the original story that honestly I wish the show had clarified. So thank you for an enjoyable read!

I'm surprised to say this but I feel like there's something missing near the end in the last few lines, something that may have tied her mom's words and the title better. But don't let that bother you, as you gave us a lot.

Thanks again :D
6/15/2012 c1 15AoiKuroNekoSan
I like this. I had been curious why Hatter says, "Finally" towards the end when he sees Alice. It made me think there was some kind of time discrepancy. This is a nice idea of what could've happened.
8/2/2011 c1 Zyvorg
Good story, very amusing ending. It definitely has the feel of fruit to explain something that no one would believe.
7/28/2011 c1 2Emmauk26
wow, erm, that was good, but it was a little rushed, and his name is just Hatter, not the Hatter, like the idea of them telling her mum what happened, maybe you should add more, like her reaction when he wakes up.

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