for Without You7/2/2011 c3 
45HashDash23
Okay a few things I like this story and it is branched off mine so I based the OC off her. Second it's her first story give her some credit and don't flame her. Third if you don't like don't read she gets very excited when she writes some more so when dhe saw that she had a review she got excited don't kill her spirit I get that constructive critesism is always helpful but next time don't be so blunt. And have you read my story/ies Neneh is not only in Dear Diary she is also in Glimpians so back off.
45HashDash23Okay a few things I like this story and it is branched off mine so I based the OC off her. Second it's her first story give her some credit and don't flame her. Third if you don't like don't read she gets very excited when she writes some more so when dhe saw that she had a review she got excited don't kill her spirit I get that constructive critesism is always helpful but next time don't be so blunt. And have you read my story/ies Neneh is not only in Dear Diary she is also in Glimpians so back off.
7/2/2011 c3 9ThatInvisibleGirl
Can I be honest with you? Because I pride myself in my honesty, and I really dislike lying.
I don't like the story. I'm sorry. I find it unrealistic. She broke down in the hall and just said "I'm a drug addict"? That would never happen. If Neveh was really a drug "addict" then she would be taking it more than once a month, doing a drug 12 times does not make them an addict.
And then in chapter 3, Sam didn't want to sleep with her. In Never Been Kissed, Sam and Finn were both upset that the had girlfriends who wouldn't "put out".
And personally, I really dislike when people base OC's on themselves.
Sorry.
9ThatInvisibleGirlCan I be honest with you? Because I pride myself in my honesty, and I really dislike lying.
I don't like the story. I'm sorry. I find it unrealistic. She broke down in the hall and just said "I'm a drug addict"? That would never happen. If Neveh was really a drug "addict" then she would be taking it more than once a month, doing a drug 12 times does not make them an addict.
And then in chapter 3, Sam didn't want to sleep with her. In Never Been Kissed, Sam and Finn were both upset that the had girlfriends who wouldn't "put out".
And personally, I really dislike when people base OC's on themselves.
Sorry.
6/16/2011 c1 45HashDash23
Nice, I love it- even though i have already read it it was still great. Update soon!XD
45HashDash23Nice, I love it- even though i have already read it it was still great. Update soon!XD