for Lovely Complex9/13/2012 c1 Guest
no nj can not leave
no nj can not leave
3/25/2012 c1 MafiaPrinceAlLie
Mighty adorable Chandinee! *glomps* I miss you! Poor El... these two make a nice couple. No Beaver for you though..I like the way that you write because its sort of crisp, fresh, clean, and dreamy. Like a child's dream. Sounds like bull right...? But thats how I feel. *shrug* I like it a lot.
(-Eli((y' know from letters...*hide*))
Mighty adorable Chandinee! *glomps* I miss you! Poor El... these two make a nice couple. No Beaver for you though..I like the way that you write because its sort of crisp, fresh, clean, and dreamy. Like a child's dream. Sounds like bull right...? But thats how I feel. *shrug* I like it a lot.
(-Eli((y' know from letters...*hide*))
9/2/2011 c1 
5SilvrWing
Me: Cute story :)
New York: I'm a GIRL!
Me: Don't know where he came from, but yes this my OC New York-
New York: What. The. Fuck
Me: Who has issues, but don't worry about him he's always like that. ( looks away n then glares at New York) Do u have something 2 say?
New York: ( rolls eyes) Yes mom! Sorry that i over reacted,but come on. Seriously Im a girl?
Me: Sorry about that
Annie with New York n sadly no longer Puerto Rico
5SilvrWingMe: Cute story :)
New York: I'm a GIRL!
Me: Don't know where he came from, but yes this my OC New York-
New York: What. The. Fuck
Me: Who has issues, but don't worry about him he's always like that. ( looks away n then glares at New York) Do u have something 2 say?
New York: ( rolls eyes) Yes mom! Sorry that i over reacted,but come on. Seriously Im a girl?
Me: Sorry about that
Annie with New York n sadly no longer Puerto Rico
8/7/2011 c1 8HetareIggysama
HOW DARE YOU! YOU TOLD ME YOU WERE BAD GRAMMATICALY, AND JUST LOOK AT THIS! *takes deep breath*
THIS IS FLIPPING CUTE! DON'T EVER DOUBT YOURSELF AGAIN!
alright, so I may not know much about the states, or whats really going on with Jersey leaving (wouldn't he still be a state?) but, omg its so cuddly! I love the dialouge, and wow, nice way to put in descriptive conversation! I personaly liked the ending, it made me get more ideas about thier night together, its really sweet. lol at canada! XD
and by netherlands being her other dad, what do you mean? also, wouldnt finland and sweden be america and his states gram and gramps? (americas granparents or parent, and then the states's great grand parents) gah! my brain just exploded from Hetalian idiology! (note to self, make fanfic called just that, explaining family and relationship :P)
8HetareIggysamaHOW DARE YOU! YOU TOLD ME YOU WERE BAD GRAMMATICALY, AND JUST LOOK AT THIS! *takes deep breath*
THIS IS FLIPPING CUTE! DON'T EVER DOUBT YOURSELF AGAIN!
alright, so I may not know much about the states, or whats really going on with Jersey leaving (wouldn't he still be a state?) but, omg its so cuddly! I love the dialouge, and wow, nice way to put in descriptive conversation! I personaly liked the ending, it made me get more ideas about thier night together, its really sweet. lol at canada! XD
and by netherlands being her other dad, what do you mean? also, wouldnt finland and sweden be america and his states gram and gramps? (americas granparents or parent, and then the states's great grand parents) gah! my brain just exploded from Hetalian idiology! (note to self, make fanfic called just that, explaining family and relationship :P)
6/18/2011 c1 11Worldsweaver
Awesome one-shot Chandinee. I wish for more. But luckily I haven't started vomiting kittens yet XD. Though it wasn't that fluffy. Either that or I'm just an insensitive person- I'll go for the later, I can be like a brick when it coes to stuff like that. :)
There is one gramatical mistake that I would like to point out: "J-j-jersey left John" makes it sound like New Jersey actually left John. Just add a coma in between left and John and you should be fine.
Keep up with these awesome one-shots! It was a great idea to start turning these letters into stories.
Worldsweaver.
P.S. Texas enjoyed the story too. ;)
11WorldsweaverAwesome one-shot Chandinee. I wish for more. But luckily I haven't started vomiting kittens yet XD. Though it wasn't that fluffy. Either that or I'm just an insensitive person- I'll go for the later, I can be like a brick when it coes to stuff like that. :)
There is one gramatical mistake that I would like to point out: "J-j-jersey left John" makes it sound like New Jersey actually left John. Just add a coma in between left and John and you should be fine.
Keep up with these awesome one-shots! It was a great idea to start turning these letters into stories.
Worldsweaver.
P.S. Texas enjoyed the story too. ;)