
7/4/2017 c10 BBCbabe752
I really appreciated this fic. I feel like Peter and Neal were very in character. This is the first White Collar fanfic where I liked Neal shipped with an OC and thought it was well written. Rae was a likeable character and I admired her persistence. I'm a bit of a Kate-basher myself so I think that makes me a little biased. Great work!
I really appreciated this fic. I feel like Peter and Neal were very in character. This is the first White Collar fanfic where I liked Neal shipped with an OC and thought it was well written. Rae was a likeable character and I admired her persistence. I'm a bit of a Kate-basher myself so I think that makes me a little biased. Great work!
3/7/2017 c10
3PastOneonta
This was very good. I ordinarily review each chapter but had time to read all the way through so I am only posting one review. The story deserves more reviews, truly, it is very good. It has a good plot, great characters behaving consistently, a dramatic finish, surprises, and a Neal we know and love. Peter is very good, Mozzie is very good. Your original character Rae is fascinating. She and Neal might work as a couple, you can see their loneliness and hope. Neal has to recover from Kate. And why, oh why, did Kate betray him so badly? I would love to see more of Rae and Neal and an answer to that question. But regretfully I don't think you are writing anymore. So thank you for this, for sharing, for finishing, and for leaving it posted for new readers.

This was very good. I ordinarily review each chapter but had time to read all the way through so I am only posting one review. The story deserves more reviews, truly, it is very good. It has a good plot, great characters behaving consistently, a dramatic finish, surprises, and a Neal we know and love. Peter is very good, Mozzie is very good. Your original character Rae is fascinating. She and Neal might work as a couple, you can see their loneliness and hope. Neal has to recover from Kate. And why, oh why, did Kate betray him so badly? I would love to see more of Rae and Neal and an answer to that question. But regretfully I don't think you are writing anymore. So thank you for this, for sharing, for finishing, and for leaving it posted for new readers.
5/21/2013 c10 x Varda x
I love this story sooo much! Outsider POV is fantastic and I like how the relationship grows between Rae and Neal throughout. Poor Neal too, but that's part of the fun of it :)
I love this story sooo much! Outsider POV is fantastic and I like how the relationship grows between Rae and Neal throughout. Poor Neal too, but that's part of the fun of it :)
12/29/2012 c8 BlueDiamondStar
OMG this chapter has just given me the most 'stomach-muscles-torturing' laugh like in a week.
And biggest 'awwws' for the day xD
OMG this chapter has just given me the most 'stomach-muscles-torturing' laugh like in a week.
And biggest 'awwws' for the day xD
12/29/2012 c6 BlueDiamondStar
OMG the dog was totally adorable!
WOW that song again! I haven't stopped rewatching that clip from YT...
Holy...! Kate? oh poor Neal *.*
And I so like Rea!
OMG the dog was totally adorable!
WOW that song again! I haven't stopped rewatching that clip from YT...
Holy...! Kate? oh poor Neal *.*
And I so like Rea!
12/29/2012 c3 BlueDiamondStar
Hughes seemed OOC here but guess it's for the purposes of the story.
And wow, Rea actually cares for Neal!
this chapter lifted my hopes ;)
Hughes seemed OOC here but guess it's for the purposes of the story.
And wow, Rea actually cares for Neal!
this chapter lifted my hopes ;)
12/29/2012 c2 BlueDiamondStar
wow! i'm already heavily drooling over those cars. Mustang's my top #1 fave here too. and next two are Lamborghini and Ferrari.
*stopping drool-fest and onto next chapter:)*
wow! i'm already heavily drooling over those cars. Mustang's my top #1 fave here too. and next two are Lamborghini and Ferrari.
*stopping drool-fest and onto next chapter:)*
10/22/2011 c2
7mam711
I'm enjoying the story so far, but having multiple characters talking in the same paragraph is really confusing at times.

I'm enjoying the story so far, but having multiple characters talking in the same paragraph is really confusing at times.
9/13/2011 c6
2SK Musings
So glad to see another chapter up for this fic ... I have really been enjoying it. Rae is a good match for Neal (err ... Wedgwood). Love that she got him a dog. Hope to see a new chapter up soon!

So glad to see another chapter up for this fic ... I have really been enjoying it. Rae is a good match for Neal (err ... Wedgwood). Love that she got him a dog. Hope to see a new chapter up soon!
9/12/2011 c6
8govgal
nicely done! I'm so glad Rae is on Neal's side, especially after the last note. creepy!

nicely done! I'm so glad Rae is on Neal's side, especially after the last note. creepy!
7/13/2011 c3
7AliWC
:D this is a good story. Your OC is not annoying; that's always a good start!
I do like the premise of this AU, I look forward to your next chapter.
It would be easier to understand who was talking if you gave each new speaker's dialogue a new paragraph or at least a new line.
A very good first fic!

:D this is a good story. Your OC is not annoying; that's always a good start!
I do like the premise of this AU, I look forward to your next chapter.
It would be easier to understand who was talking if you gave each new speaker's dialogue a new paragraph or at least a new line.
A very good first fic!
7/12/2011 c3
5SerialChick
Nice chapter. Go Rae!
Hughes was a little OOC in this but I guess every story needs a bad guy. I'm guessing Neal and Rae are going to become a thing? I like her, she's awesome. Great driver, computer nerd and protector of con-men. Update again soon!

Nice chapter. Go Rae!
Hughes was a little OOC in this but I guess every story needs a bad guy. I'm guessing Neal and Rae are going to become a thing? I like her, she's awesome. Great driver, computer nerd and protector of con-men. Update again soon!